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Andrea_Feathers2yrCommentedHis parents not her
Jack returned to focus on the files in his hand, while Erick quietly stood beside Jack silently. He did not dare to disturb the concentration of the master who was serious, even though Jack had known Sophia and her parents for a long time, but he did not know anything about their family tree. Because in the past, he was betrothed to Sophia by his late father and mother, Jack was not very interested in Sophia, so he did not make any investigations about who his fiancé was at that time. Jack had entrusted everything to his mother back then, and what his mother considered to be good for him, then he would agree. Finally, Sophia betrayed him a few months before her parents died in a single accident.- Andrea_Feathers2yrCommentedCh 233 His Real Purpose
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He is scaring her off. A bit possesive are we, Jack.
Without speaking, Jack then handed Erick's cell phone back. He then seemed to be sitting quietly, in contrast to a few minutes ago when he was grumpy. After confirming that Anne had turned off her cell phone, Jack finally sat quietly. - Andrea_Feathers2yrCommentedCh 122 Seeing
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I dont understand what makes what she said sound bad. Is it implying that it is more than a friendship?
"Aghhhh Anne, you're so stupid, why did you have to talk like that before?!!" Anne squealed in irritation as she covered her face with her palms. - Andrea_Feathers2yrCommentedCh 221 I think I should feed you my baby milk!!!
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Can I ask where your from so I can look up some of the things that dont make sense to me in order to get a better understanding of why you word them that way? Im sure where you live it makes sense but where I'm from it can mean something totally dIfferent.
"Lizzy,let me introduce her to you.Her name is Veronica.She is my cousin sister." Damien Kyle said. - Andrea_Feathers2yrCommented
The hers and his are still backwards. Her is she (female) and he is him (male).
"But what?Don't say you again have a condition?" Kelvin Kyle said placing both of her hands behind his head.That made his muscle bludged even more beneath the fabric of his shirt. - Andrea_Feathers2yrCommented
So its his cousin but she is like a sister.
"Veronica,is a slightly spoiled kid.She is my mom's sister's daughter.Since we don't have any sister so she is like a sister to me and Ian.This year she reached her twenties.But she still acts like she is ten years old." Damien Kyle explained. - Andrea_Feathers2yrCommented
Cousin or sister? Cant be both.
"Lizzy,let me introduce her to you.Her name is Veronica.She is my cousin sister." Damien Kyle said. - Andrea_Feathers3yrCommented
This paragraph needs re worded. Really hard to understand what your saying here
"Last time you also said that while you sent the shooter to kill him.What happened?Instead of him,it's the shooter who needed to die.Fortunately I sent my men to kill him.They ran over the car over him either he would get evidence against me."He lit up a cigarette and took a puff. - Andrea_Feathers3yrCommented
ConfIrm should be inform
"You are busy with shooting so Rose said to me not to confirm you!" He said. - Andrea_Feathers3yrCommented
It will effect him or wont effect him? It reads both ways.
" Hey,woman!Whatever your name is!Now leave from here.You know what your this kind of slutty act will don't affect me."The man in front of her said in a very cold voice. - Andrea_Feathers3yrCommentedCh 94 I need to prove I am a man!!!
- Andrea_Feathers3yrCommentedCh 53 I need a kid model!!!
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This book is really hard to read wIth all the grammical errors. It really needs an editor. I'm guessing english is the secondary language of the author the way it reads?
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