Such a good book perfect writing and fluent grammar a golden book i would say 10/10....................................................................................................................................

Such a golden bok nice plot and almost perfect grammar this book is so good i hope you write more chapter i cant wait to read more..........................................

The last part of chapter 2 Just leave it to your imagination of what happened haha

A good novel not my type but it has agood plot also god charter building and a few grammital error over all its ok actually but hope you make more chapters.

I realy gold novel it was fun to read also it has good plot and an intiristing story line it has also good grammar and writing style i would say 9/10 i good novel hope you update more

For real the chapters are to short don't ublish if not 1k words but it has an intiristing story it has a good plot also its a bit fast paced but overall its ok i would say 6/10 I hope you improve and work hard also it has a few grammatical error but you can always change that so yeah.

An interisting novel and nice plot i cant review well because it has only 3 chapter but i think this will be good in the future als i hope to have more chapters.

suuch a fire book cant wait for more good plot fire chapter 1 to 2 i hope for more chapter cause it realy was good i reccomend this book!! i hope others would enjoy reading................................ lez go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suck star novel good grammar and good plot i hope for more but i think make mre chapters hahahahaahhhahahahaahahhahahahahahhahahaahahahahahahahahaa

God novel als pls dont put those thngs at the beggining it was hard to read aslo update and i hope this novel goes well 7/10 good work author

The book is good 7/10 also it ahas almost perfect excexution of words also it has a interisting story which i think will develop greatly but i hope you improve your story dev but overly its a gold ihope to read more.

I am just gonna write a review Don't Mind me!.........................................................................................................................................................

a gold novel very nice very good plot and wordings also it has very go world setting i hope for more!!.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Just gonna review here don't mind me...........................................................................................................................................................

god novel but not the best i would say 7/10......................................................................................................................................

thank you i 'll update soon

A nice book with nice story development and has a nice world background a nice writing style I hope for more chapters.......................

the novel is good but the world background ok still needs improvement this novel has potential if the author would execute it will and the explanations of the character is still not good but it will improve

a nice and very good novel but still needs improvement on writing style but still 5 I cant wait for more.......................................

Very good story and interesting mc, oh and nice plot, but the way you pov people is hard to read, so try changing it. Sorry, but I am not gotta giving five cause it has disappointed me after two chapters. Much sorry, it was exciting at first, but then I lost interest it's so hard to read cant point were is the mc or the others characters I can point them when they say their names or they talk with how they were set to speak so far, you can improve so keep up the good work