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JujumasterX24dReplied to Dao_Of_Benevolenceđđđ
Niklas barged in on the two people he came to save having sexual intercourse. The man pulled up his pants, and the lady pushed down her gown, hiding her face in embarrassment.- JujumasterX24dReplied to Dao_Of_Benevolence
Almighty thunder god
The rowdiness vanished as everyone was struck with fright by Niklas exuding his angry aura to the fullest. His body was still sparking with electricity, and now his sword was too. He calmly paced towards the exit, dragging the tip of the lighting blade behind him on the floor. Each of his eyes was replaced by a union of slithering electric sparks. Niklas looked godlike and frightening. The sound from the dragged sword's tip accentuated his figure as a domineering force. - JujumasterX3mthReplied to JujumasterXCh 13 Red back Hyena
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- JujumasterX3mthReplied to Tims232
The information is necessary for the story to progress. And the paragraph states that the story takes place in an alternate reality. I understand the angle you are coming from, and I appreciate your contribution. But my take on fiction is somewhat open-minded.
***Author notes: the events in this novel takes place on an alternate-reality-Earth. The setting is medieval. Mana, magic and myths are true in this reality. Have a good time, thank you.**** - JujumasterX5mthReplied to Tims232
I incorporate elements from eastern fiction and western fiction. Second, the story is set on a very fictitious Earth. Why you should I limit characters name to European names?đ I'm not even from Europe. Last and Importantly, it's my choice
***Author notes: the events in this novel takes place on an alternate-reality-Earth. The setting is medieval. Mana, magic and myths are true in this reality. Have a good time, thank you.**** - JujumasterX5mthCommentedCh 1 I. The man who calls himself the S.O.D
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yo, advice from me, don't use real word religious figures and objects in your novel. Twist them, like rename the religion, it's object and other affiliated things to it. This is to avoid drama that could get your book banned
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give a paragraph dedicated to your character making a speech. DON'T include it in the body of the story
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Instead say, "I was late to school." It sounds fluent.
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So, your college means highschool. i think you should use highschool. it's easier to understand. In some territories, college means university
This paragraph has been deleted. - JujumasterX5mthReplied to DaoistsNzReXCh 1 The Emperor of Camelot
- JujumasterX5mthReplied to DaoistsNzReXCh 1 The Emperor of Camelot
- JujumasterX5mthReplied to Matt_1956
Americans would me proud
This was a high-quality Dark Fire Gem. It had the properties of fire and poison. It was typically used in embedding, whether it was on a weapon or a piece of jewelry. Once embedded, the Dark Fire Gem would have shocking destructive power that didn't depend on the strength of the user. Even in the hands of a 3-year-old child, it could kill ten strong, robust men like Jimmy. - JujumasterX7mthReplied to PHOTON_EFFECT
I don confirmđ
The pure and elegant girl looked down at the huge golden retriever and, without minding the question, answered with a slight smile, "450 pounds." - JujumasterX7mthReplied to ultimate_kars
for real
"You are a Fool who keeps his word." - JujumasterX7mthReplied to Raita_Raita_5698Ch 22 Good news
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spoilers?
After the demise of his parents, Quinn had not had any family members to support him. He had lacked the means to buy even the cheapest ability book and as far as he knew his family had not been special enough to be an Original. - JujumasterX7mthCommentedDiablo, Lux's first Named Creature and trusted companion, pointed its sword at the Dark Draugr's face and moved it in a taunting manner.