The beginning of the story is very good and we have to see how the story develops from now on.

Isagi

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I say a 5 out of 10

hahaha I like that about raichi devouring isagi I never liked the character keep it up

Very good and keep it up I look forward to the next chapter👍🏻[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

After you finish your exams update the story, it will be better and you will have a clearer mind to continue writing and good luck 👍🏻

A yes or yes and C

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Muy buen capitulo como siempre ya espero el próximo no tardes tanto hahaha

I don't know which player, but anyone can take it, okay, but an irrelevant one that doesn't add anything to the plot would be better.👍🏻

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Yeees

I love how the story goes and this serious Naruto who doesn't care about Sasuke and Sakura I love it hahaha [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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