nice repetition

i really like this

mid plot

I will try to upload 2 chapters per month but I am not sure if I will be able to.

mid writing

Ariel possesses a very strong ability to write in a high quality. I believe that his story is very well written and he has the potential to become a very famous author/manga writer. His style of writings adds to the greatness of the story and I am sure he will make it far as an author. As far as updates, he is very inconsistent when it comes to his scheduling. He says he will write a chapter once per week however writing once a month is still a struggle for him. As he as only written 8 chapters (which is around 2000 words per chapter) He hasn't really had the chance with character development, but I feel as if he would be great at it, which is why I gave him a 3 out of 5. The character design is absolutely flawless, each character is well made, detailed, and each have a distinct personality. As far as worldbuilding goes, if we were going purely off of his world building in his earlier chapters, I would have rated it a high 1 to a low 2, however, post-chapter 6, his world building has improved a lot, since it has been a while since chapter 1, he has learned more skill about worldbuilding and has really improved, that is why I gave him a 4. With a more stable upload schedule and more time to develop his writing, he could get a 4.4 out of 5.

trash, bad grammar mistakes

bad english