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  • DoubleHelixa year ago
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    Enjoying the story so far! What is his end goal? all powerful? or will he end up trying to build up his organization to something bigger and become kinda like god-emperor of mankind? or just enjoy roaming the multiverse as an adventurer?

  • DoubleHelixa year ago
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    I'm wondering if all this calculation and logic during fights for his life will shift peters thinking/morals to be willing to do anything for strength/power as long as the benefits outweigh the detriments. Also is the goal of the novel ultimate personal power to where peter becomes unkillable by OAA, or peter strengthens himself and humanity as a whole elevate civilization until humanity is unkillable

  • DoubleHelixa year ago
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    Great chapter! Will Lex abuse his luck power even more now he knows about it? Will Lex use luck to find alien tech to kickstart access to space?

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  • DoubleHelixa year ago
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    thanks for the chapter. I'm looking forward to humanity becoming a space faring civilization. What is Earth's policy towards alien abductees like Peter Quill? Will they let them rejoin Earth as citizens or will they have to go through the process of immigration like aliens trying to join as citizens?

  • DoubleHelix2 years ago
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    Overlooked aspect of the super soldier serum, it also increases intelligence. Taking inspiration from other works (NZT-48 from limitless, CPH4 from Lucy) main character could create a version of super soldier serum that boosts intelligence more and distribute it to entire country to supercharge research speed.

  • DoubleHelix2 years ago
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    Great start to what is looking to be a great story! Can't wait to see what happens next. If you are taking suggestions read below, otherwise take it as my enthusiasm for enjoying the story so far. I'm hoping the main character coverts sentinels from mutant killers to earths version of the asgard destroyer. Maybe find a way to upscale Wakandas forcefield to surround the entire planet. I think it could be possible to create the start of a Mars colony/terraforming plan before the chitauri invasion. Salvage any alien tech to understand operating principles/physics, but recreate with earth tech. destroyed kree ships from carol danvers, skrull stuff, chitauri, dbari if dark phoenix is part of this, dark elves during convergance, that asgard berserker staff hidden on earth.

  • DoubleHelix2 years ago
    Replied to NOOBwriter69

    Isn't that just Jason Mamoa?

  • DoubleHelix2 years ago
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    Jor-El kills or beats up whatever god comes to make trouble and finds a way to ascend to godhood for himself

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  • DoubleHelix2 years ago
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    Enjoying it so far! Hope you continue this.

  • DoubleHelix3 years ago
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    I think merging the world with Stargate SG1 would be interesting. The Stargate universe is big enough to provide lots of diverse plot ideas, while also a majority of the show happens around Earth with regular humans. It also fits with the whole alien theme going on.