MasterGamer850

No... I simply can't accept it. The most painful thing about a good story is that it always has an ending... It's a very good translation, and honestly one of the best I've come across on this platform with its more decadent content. Very good, 20/10. I highly recommend it; it's not boring, and although it sometimes throws in some slightly out-of-place things, I've been satisfied.[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]

Dude, that's a great story, but I've realized you're the original. There's another guy publishing the same book as you, but it's called Pokémon: Son of Geovanni. It's a few episodes behind, but he's doing better than you. It's a shame, really.[img=angry]

papapum XD

This is one of the worst endings I've ever seen, I'm an avid reader and in my opinion you gave it a very abrupt and dry ending, at least after this you could have made an epilogue with the final outcome of how it ended, how Silver fared, who died, what changes there were, but leaving it like that is really frustrating because it just leaves it there. I'm not one to comment much but when I see a story made with a lot of love I comment on ideas or premises, I don't own your work but at least you should have given it more depth at the end. Otherwise it's good, the porn takes the shine off your story but otherwise it's good and it was good. Very good fic I liked it. 7/10. Maybe check out more of your work. Have a nice day and God bless you.

baki references

It will disintegrate them..

smart...

kakuzu be like:

is fanfic bro.

pokemon stadium? nostalgic -v-