Daoist_Rin1

Chanderpaul!

Where did I self insert? The whole point is that you don't have to do that to enjoy a good read. Do Christians only read books with devout personas? Do they only listen to Jesus rock and gospel? And the list goes on... I appreciate the one-pager though. Seems like I hit a nerve..

First and second wife agreement obviously

Su 'bout to have a mental breakdown and so am I

Author stop it please. My tears are dry already. I'll become parched if I cry any longer

Didn't he keep them in the chaos world, it was written those creates were transferred to the chaos universe

Chapter needs some serious maintenance before publishing. I'd rather you guys take your time for that so we don't need to re-read chapters after editing. .

Seriously impressed by the writing of these chapters. Author had me crying like when Ash resurrected

This chapter was written so much better. Author your forte lies with space battles. Skip all the relations/romance stuff and keep it going :)

Aiit, fair enough mate.