IronCobra

mfw arcane shift

The author is at least partially humble regarding their inexperience, which is nice. The story, however seems largely disorganized. The author also blatantly admits AI has written part of the story. For pure grammar correction, there are better tools out there specifically for that. ChatGPT takes soul out of writing, and should not replace human effort. Even for new language learners, I would recommend furthering your study of the language, no matter what language you want to write in, than using AI to write a book for you. Readers, do not waste your precious real money here.

That was good

I want to be clear one last time to any others who might read my review. I am not hating- or breaking any rules regarding it. I hold a negative opinion of this book and expressed some reasons for discontent. The author or any others believing that those reasons are invalid or fake does not turn it into hate- I’m not making anything up to purposely throw shade to something I’ve read for an hour or 2. I dislike the book, yes, but there is no hate. What I also dislike are the author’s mocking and dismissive responses as well as accusatory reactions. I also clearly acknowledged I’m in a minority who dislike the book- after all my reasons for dislike stem from my own specific life experiences. If one chooses to ask for reasoning but thinks it’s invalid just because it doesn’t apply to them, that’s an insensitive self centered view. I do hope for the author also to find more readers who enjoy it, but I’m out. I’m not spending money for the reasons I already listed in the original review.

I read the book as it says next to my name- my review is my own opinion, no hate to anyone or anything. No point debating since author directly shames me for a different opinion.

The first 30 chapters didn’t really hook me to get me to spend money- what didn’t make sense (and what I didn’t like) was how the attitudes of characters were sometimes inconsistent with the setting- where for example, in a Russian mafia story, the FMC should be dead many times over I do acknowledge that’s my own subjective take- this is probably just not my taste

Not worth my coins Story is written well but feels too complex and characters don’t make sense Just my subjective opinion

Foreshadowing ??

At that point he could just say he’s split his mind/brain to do those 2 tasks- that’s a real thing and pretty plausible

Is there a working discord link anywhere