aaron_siby
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Author if it’s not much of a bother, I think you should change the name of the main character. Mangral doesn’t sound nice to read. This is only my opinion so if other readers can also state their opinion the name in the comments, it can help the author decide whether to change it or not.
The novel started slow but as it progressed it got way better.
Grammar mistake at trains “we’re”.