Andrew_Midkiff_g6

couldn't he turn into dito make copies and turn one copy into this alien and have the others scout out the portal?

supreme sub pineapple and jalapeños for the mushrooms and bell pepper

didn't the story say when he was killing his first world boss that the upper ranked races didn't interact with the lower races except to give them orders? if that is true then that means that the lower races should at least know where the upper races are to not get in there way

I think you missed the g in gripped

I thought that he had an earth spirit root

I think it should be. "There was no doubt that he would not have been able to do something like that before." because the way it is now would mean that he could have done it before when from the context it would seem like he could not have done it

I think that she was going to lose her daughter if she kept going, but this paragraph is saying that she was not going to lose her daughter

he carries his cane (not a crutch) that hides his Zanpakuto

I think you meant transmitting, not transmitter

I think think that you added a w to the word no in, "But Avery had no doubts that Grito's skills would come in handy, "