I don’t comment often but I’d like to say thank you for the chapter and those to come, I wish you inspiration and hope you enjoy writing as much as I enjoy reading. 🙏

Enjoying the story so far and thank you for the chapter, you’re doing great! I do have a piece of constructive criticism though, try to avoid repetition in your writing I haven’t seen it really anywhere else so far but the last 5 or 6 paragraphs of the chapter all start with “it is said” With that being said keep up the great work!