Jalen_Gotoy

I feel like this will get big in the future cant wait for all t bombshells and twists for this story. I like the world with the game elements and, I love the characters I hope to see the waifu steal my heart and yan yan become more mature as she ages.

Very nice I like it for a Novice novelist its amazing....................................................................................................................................

interesting very nice but there are a few flaws. Keep it up Hyper sensei!