Silvershot_Vinny

I love the story so far. It's not one of those that has an action-packed entry, but I can feel the tensions rising. The characters are well developed- even the side ones. The world background seems limited, but that's because the MC has not been outside the castle walls before- so it kinda makes sense. Overall, I think it deserves a read.

Thank you very much for reviewing and trying out my novel. I know I am a little late in delivering this thank you, but I had some outside troubles. I hope you understand. Once again, thank you, and I wish you a merry read.

That's what I was aiming for!

Thank you very much for the response!

Hello, welcome to my novel. I hope you have an enjoyable time reading through it! Any power stones you could spare are appreciated, but more importantly, I hope you can add this to your library if you like the premise of the novel. I will be building an epic, which you don't want to miss. Thank you for your time.

Hello everyone, this is the author! (which I assume you can already tell.) I hope this novel can satisfy your literary cravings and then some. I will try my best to post at least one chapter a day- but keep in mind that I have no ability to post like seventy a day like other authors. With that in mind, I hope you enjoy it! ((Also drop a power stone or two if you want) Maybe add it to your library too?)

It's not really an MC basis, but there are two main viewpoints with other side characters sprinkled in.

Thank you! I hope to see you again soon!

Yeah, I agree. Thanks for the comment, I will be reaping the idea off of this in my future installments. But, there is a reason why I made the MC trust them so much- albeit (like you said) a little rushed- and I hope you read to the point where it is revealed!

You're welcome, and I hope you enjoy my novel!