There's a little leap on logic in this chapter, if hine become strong, don't the marine/world government will take her to be a test subject?

I'm about to write a paragraph, but thankgod someone already said it. Agree

Actually before SAO there is a game from anime Accel burst before that, just a fun fact

Sheeshh its back

You need to improve the e Writing part

I actually find a plot hole in the story, on the first chapter we got to know that the mc like to watch anime right? So how did he didn't know any of this waifu...

Regrowth makes you feels all the pain the people feels when they die x24 no?

Honestly i don't even know why people complaining, if you decide to read this kind of novel you need to be prepared for what the author write

Trap, r*pe to mind break

So many miss grammar, i recommend you use grammarly

Hello an actual someone who have made flappy bird look a like, it's actually not that hard to make if you just doing it as a side project you pretty much can make it in 3-5 days, and if you just doing it fully you can do it in 1-2 days

Can you do shinomiya kaguya?

I recomending shinomiya kaguya

I don't see a way for you to make it faster.. Because like you say the demon king use whatever fire to shorten the mirror time by half.. So i will read and decide to continue or not

Agree after the admin take an OP skill like persuasion he got this merely skill sharing like wth

Why even be a hypocrite with nerfing the persuasion, just embrace it already.. There's a reason this called fanfiction

The writing quality is actually top notch, still updating every day, story development pretty interesting, character design can be better but good enough, world background is a little bit lacking

Haven't read it yet becuase it's only 1 chapter, but just from the cover i expect this to be gud

Story wise i think power but i want it to be reze

Keep it going