Fantastic. The story is good, the English is good, the chapter length is good, and the character development is great. A good story I'd see myself reading after the trial!

Very good, and I've read a good bit on this site already. Super enjoyable and a 1-2 Chapters a day making this book stable enough to be a daily pick. Keep up the good work. 👍

Keep your confidence and calm during creation. It's okay to take it slow when needed!

How will Therribus' 40000 troops deal with Isabella without Garland or Arthur? Interesting. Also if Jack summons Arlcard and gives him a boost to his stats, couldn't he steamroll a portion of the surrounding army?