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  • Danvas_Mogeni
    Danvas_Mogeni3yr
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    Oh noooo. Just 6 chapters. It has been a long while but I have finally come across a really good and interesting Novel. I love the idea of the MC being built slowly unlike having him show his strengths from the first day. I hope to get more and more and more. Please do as many chapters as you can in a day. [img=faceslap]

    Life in Another Life
    Sci-fi · Wise_08
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  • Danvas_Mogeni
    Danvas_Mogeni3yr
    Commented

    I like how the author always ends the chapter in great suspense makes me glued to the book. I hope this will be consistent throughout the book.

    Ch 2 Lost in Time
    Life in Another Life
    Sci-fi · Wise_08
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  • Danvas_Mogeni
    Danvas_Mogeni3yr
    Commented

    I love how you have instilled vulnerabilities on the MC, makes him look and feel as human as possible.

    "Why, are you crying?" A soft voice from behind asked. "Nothing, I was just leaving." He woke up to continue his journey to nowhere. It was getting dark and his anxiety levels were high enough to provide a ledge for a suicide attempt. Then it struck him that the old shopkeeper never told him the year or month it was.
    Life in Another Life
    Sci-fi · Wise_08
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  • Danvas_Mogeni
    Danvas_Mogeni3yr
    Commented

    This fast chapter has been structured perfectly, not revealing much and building the MC appropriately. I love this novel.

    Ch 1 The Questions with No Answers
    Life in Another Life
    Sci-fi · Wise_08
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