I went back to chapter 15 and I already see how well the story works, I really like how it is explained now. you do a very good job, you added new characters and that's good.
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I really like the story, I have no reason to lie, how the characters are explained and how they are written, I find the main character familiar but I don't know with who, continue with the story, I think it's great. peace!
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