If your going to switch POVs from anyone other than mc make the information relevant and not just a bunch of information that was previously mentioned that we as the readers already know your taking away from the story

We know you’ve told us multiple times

This chapter had a bunch of explaining the same things over and over

I hate how the author over explains the story

Why doesn’t he just use the same bell that woke him up

Or maybe this

I haven’t posted a comment in a while but I’m back now and I’m still loving this book keep up the work and keep pushing out the 🔥 chapters

U can see the difference in the sense of description and detail in the story from the paid and unpaid version I actually enjoy the A.I but I also love the way the raw emotion u put into it as well but I understand the overload of tasks so either is fine with me as long as u don’t drop the book

I hope that’s a joke

It was never bad in my opinion

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Not Glenn what’s going to happen with her domain now

Loved the release of so many chapters thanks

Let’s gooooo!!!

I send gifts and golden tickets

No your the real MVP keep making this story better

The vividness of the last two chapters were excellent great storytelling

And I loved every one