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The One Piece... THE ONE PIECE IS REAL...!!!

"Hidden". Alright.

Haven't been keeping up since I reviewed this, but hasn't he already got at least one? Perhaps not something permanent or top-tier, but he should already have one at this point.

Nice chapter. I've read lots of TDG fics but rarely was there a chapter that I could consider as actually, truly satisfying.

Just throw out AOE attacks. Not like it's gonna drain you.

I don't have much recollection of the old version. This new version, however, does have a better feel to it. The ruthlessness of the MC is balanced and honestly, his actions are what I wished the original Nie Li had done.

The Spirit Hall is way better than any empire and faction shown in DDL1. Unfortunately, Qian Xunji was a crazy piece of shit and fucked everything up.

I've read the MTL of this. The early and mid parts were well-done, but the later parts of the story are complete dogshit. It was so rushed and uncreative.

The order of the chapters are incorrect.

This shit is annoying as fuck. I hate seeing this shit.