yet again, the worldbuilding is impeccable! I loved Cecilia's description and this tiny encounter Ryne had with her! adorable!

wow! I found the concept of the magical beasts very intriguing! very well written!👏👏

I felt so sorry for Ryne🥺, Daney is one little brat!

"naked exhibitionist" oof🤣

I loved this encounter!😁

what a burn!🤣

I love how you described loneliness here!

I think the hyphen here could have been taken out and the sentences could be made to flow more naturally!

I think this "name carving" is some sort of foreshadowing :) I may be wrong, but let's see!

I love how these surprises were structured!

oooh! I am curious about this letter now! an interesting element.

the word "signified" here could be replaced with a better word, makes it sound textbookish rather than emotional!

brilliant imagery!