Weird to associate his death tattoo with pirates

Create new characters for the other villages they should /could have sum prodigies tht can potentially tip the power scale to 60:40 with konoha on top so if war breaks out it could still go either way depending on alliances

Garbage

How will jzaki react to njadaka

Who said death was permanent

Fan fiction.net under freeraynman

Aight I’m done like how would daemon know he made his sword instead of assuming it’s his house sword

No bs your dialogue needs work n some of the characters response’s come off as idiotic and just plain stupidity for nobles you need an editor

The pat subscription was worth it

Aye is the 30 advance chps actually on pat

Cool honestly it comes off like a authentic piece of literature with The cliffhanger which builds anticipation and first

I could see it

This is just ridiculous, it has a good foundation but how ur building it is just cheap

Nicely done

Nice start

Honestly I like how slow ur taking it

Getting very trashy with the manhua sayings

Just read to ch 5 and it’s disappointing honestly

Honestly fam ten wishes for teen wolf is extremely excessive especially the hybrid part it’s not a hybrid if it’s more than 2 races mixed he would be a chimera also with his powers there literally should be no difficulty at all with those wishes he’s like god compared to everyone else

Iroh with the clutch