Chris_Yellow
I am a poet... I devour books with great plots, am a bit less concerned with grammatical accuracy, although life is a learning road and I do try my best. https://chrisyellowwrites.wordpress.com
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Chris_Yellow4mthCommentedFinally !! They found their balence and are ready to face the world. I am so happy for them.
"But you chose to become a mage." A bitter smile rose on his lips. "And you have the right to decide how to live your life."- Chris_Yellow4mthCommented
Such an hilarious way to say she should be avoiding using her muscles. đ
The knight let out an exasperated sigh. "There must be something wrong with the way your muscles are connected, my lady." - Chris_Yellow4mthCommented
"how only a few years prior" would sound better ...
The girl's pregnancy added a soft femininity that made her more attractive. She couldn't help but recall how she was only a few years prior; This girl had been a bit of a tomboy for as far as she could remember. - Chris_Yellow4mthCommented
Wait global drama already... This is escalating fast...
[BREAKING NEWS: The Terran Cosmic Research Center reports an unprecedented drop in the Sun's hydrogen level. Scientists at the TCRC warn that humanity's window for preparation has been dramatically shrunk to a few decades at best.] - Chris_Yellow4mthCommented
Here I think the double soon is a typo. đ
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God, this is marvelous ... When will he tell her how important she's been to him?
"Thank you⌠for bringing me here," she muttered, her face against his chest. - Chris_Yellow5mthCommentedCh 329 Chapter 90
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I thought she had blue clear eyes?
Abigail's eyelashes fluttered like the soft wings of a butterfly, revealing her black eyes. She blinked a few times to adjust to the almost blinding brightness that surrounded her. She lay unmoving, looking out of the glass ceiling onto the bright blue sky. There was not a cloud to be seen up there. - Chris_Yellow9mthCommented
You forgot a " mark. đ This is getting really curious
"Don'tâŚ" Abi was surprised, not just with his sudden appearance from behind her but also because of his voice. He almost sounded like he was stopping her from touching something forbidden. Don't touch that, AbigailâŚ" his voice softened when he saw the shocked look on her face. - Chris_Yellow9mthCommented
*if* she sees you đ
"Go wash those blood Alex, she'll freak out is she sees you like that." He told him, even though he knew that Abigail might have already seen him in that state. - Chris_Yellow9mthCommented
I'm lost. Wasn't it supposed to be a musical with the classicals in which Abi would be at the piano?
The play continued smoothly. The castle men and peasant's house's men remained in their positions. They were silently laughing at themselves but every time the audience clapped and laughed along with the play's progression, they slowly started listening to the play and they too ended up looking forward to what would happen next. Alex and Zeke somehow managed to keep their faces straight until finally, after six scenes, the setting changed and Abi led them out to the backstage. - Chris_Yellow9mthCommentedCh 110 Higher
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I bet!
Alex had taken his hand off of hers when he saw her start to interact with his very excited little monster. At first, he felt quite gratified to see that she had taken the initiative to explore this part of his body but as time went by, and as she continued to explore, he felt like he was being tortured. He tried to be patient and he tried very hard to let her get familiar with him but this really was testing his patience to the core! - Chris_Yellow9mthCommented
Great! Experimental time!
Finally, she started moving. She used her forefinger and thumb to squeeze the hidden monster, curious to see if it was really as hard as a rock or maybe it had some soft bits as well. As she squeezed it, she felt it react to her touch, so, as if she was conducting an experiment, she squeezed it again to see if it would do the same thing again. To her surprise, it did! - Chris_Yellow9mthCommentedCh 24 Something good
- Chris_Yellow9mthCommentedCh 7 May I have this dance?