LordNiggaThe1st
There will be a day when this sky will be broken for my sake, when this land will collapse because of me, on that day I can say that I have everything...
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LordNiggaThe1st3yrPostedI have a question, where did you get the idea for this fanfic, I ask this because its VERY unique, I feel that you got it from a manga called "eminence in the shadows" but thats just my thoughts, you get a free 5 stars since you have 50 chaps on your other novel, so I trust that you will make it far with this one
- LordNiggaThe1st3yrReplied to DaDaoOfGetn0Bthces
yeah its from a line in his song gucci gang
A/N: you see what I did there? 😂😂😂 - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
instas kill? you mean instant kill
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zombie's don't speak, they are mindless things with no intelligence
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what does that mean? stunt mental growth
Ace sighs, "That's a relief. As for my second wish, I want us to keep all our memories and our personalities from our past life. This also means that I would like you to stunt our mental growth until we turn 14 in the MHA world as well." - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
I hate how he's wasting wishes on them, but hey its your novel do what you want. do what you love
Ace then replies, "For my second wish I want to ask that all of our families live in complete happiness and wealth." - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
you shoul'dve had them say Less gooooooo instead of lets go
Ace nods before explain the situation to them. Upon hearing each and every sentence their smiles grew wider and wider. "No freaking way! We're reincarnating into MHA? Lets freaking go!" Chris shouts while pumping his fist. - LordNiggaThe1st3yrReplied to LazySatanixDevil
I always knew that, he has been mentioned in the anime and manga multiple times not to mention that any person can figure some info about him by just googling him
Solomon sighed and thought, 'Dammit, if I had just been able to save everyone from that monster Ill Ilah. I couldn't even save my wife, and I wasn't even able to see my son, huh. If only I can start over again, and if I do, Well, I guess I can't do anything with these thoughts anyway. I guess even I, the once greatest magician, can't defy death." - LordNiggaThe1st3yrReplied to LazySatanixDevil
I like your response, keep doing the novel even though there are MANY things that are at fault I think that you will turn out fine, well thats if you don't drop it anyways hope happy writing
This surprised Solomon more than this type of Rukh was only being speculated by him and Uraltugo Noi Nueph when they took a look and researched the Rukh once. Uraltugo Noi Nueph and Solomon had researched that a being is either making or wiping off the old memories for each Rukh. Once the Rukh had been wiped out newly created, the Rukh is sent to various world's, and in those worlds, the freshly born Rukh are born into the bodies of newborns, and the rukh becomes the core of the newborn, and the soul and personality of the newborn will shape the rukh in their lifetime. - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
hmmm from I don't know if I got this correct since your way of describing isn't very good but from what I am reading, rukh are basically what make humans? its kinda like in aot when it turned out that titans were humans, right? like what Aladdin is he is human but was made from rukh, that is the creation of a magi, well i am probably wrong
This surprised Solomon more than this type of Rukh was only being speculated by him and Uraltugo Noi Nueph when they took a look and researched the Rukh once. Uraltugo Noi Nueph and Solomon had researched that a being is either making or wiping off the old memories for each Rukh. Once the Rukh had been wiped out newly created, the Rukh is sent to various world's, and in those worlds, the freshly born Rukh are born into the bodies of newborns, and the rukh becomes the core of the newborn, and the soul and personality of the newborn will shape the rukh in their lifetime. - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
also try not to say there full name, some people will not know that Uraltugo Noi Nueph is actually ugo, so don't use the full name just use ugo like everyone else and do this for characters that have very complicated names, just shorten them to the names that everyone is familiar with not the complicated one
Then suddenly, from out of nowhere, a large amount of Rukh came and seemed to come out from a portal which when Solomon saw it, he recognized it immediately. And he said out loud, "Wait isn't that a portal that leads to the new world that I entrusted Uraltugo Noi Nueph? How did it suddenly appear here and with this amount of rukh to boot." - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
ahh finally a character that I know
Then suddenly, from out of nowhere, a large amount of Rukh came and seemed to come out from a portal which when Solomon saw it, he recognized it immediately. And he said out loud, "Wait isn't that a portal that leads to the new world that I entrusted Uraltugo Noi Nueph? How did it suddenly appear here and with this amount of rukh to boot." - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
I am back from my google searching journey, and I have learned that solomans son is a bad guy, so I would like to ask, why would he save him? I'd like to assume that solomans character is kind but with a fusion of those generic wuxia cultivation novel mc's
Solomon sighed and thought, 'Dammit, if I had just been able to save everyone from that monster Ill Ilah. I couldn't even save my wife, and I wasn't even able to see my son, huh. If only I can start over again, and if I do, Well, I guess I can't do anything with these thoughts anyway. I guess even I, the once greatest magician, can't defy death." - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
the paragraph is to long, and the explanation on whats going on is trash, I am starting to have doubts on whether or not I should put power stones into this novel
Solomon himself didn't know why but sometime after, he had fused with the white rukh Decades before. Suddenly today, he was just separated from the white rukh. Although Solomon was inside the white rukh himself for Decades, weirdly enough, Solomon was separated from all the other rukh that were inside the White Rukh. Due to this, he couldn't interact with the other rukh inside the White Rukh, unlike the Rukh, which he saw using his Third Eye that other Rukhs inside the White Rukh were able to talk generally with each other. And due to this, Solomon felt like he was there and wasn't at the same time. - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
why is it that the name on the cover of your novel is different from the name of your novel?
Chapter 1 Solomon's Rebirth(Edited) - LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommented
I like the fact that you decided to use paragraphs, and especially the paragraph spacing, most authors just write a block of text and call it a chapter and some sometimes space paragraphs but then forget to its just a constant on and off pattern, and I hate ok I HATE IT when they make a paragraph long with no periods, its like reading a sentence that has no commas
In the white space of void, which was once called Alma Torran which was destroyed due to the god known as Ill Ilah. In the middle of the white area of the void was the once known as the greatest magician Solomon. - LordNiggaThe1st3yrPosted
I have high hopes for this, number 1 being that this novel actually has a schedule. I usually see only original novels with schedules but just from the fact that you have a schedule I can tell that you are organized, second being that you decided to do a magi novel, wich btw you don't see everyday. I hope that you will not drop this but nothing in this world is 100% empty promises do exist
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- LordNiggaThe1st3yrCommentedCh 4 dropped