So far it’s seems to have a lot of potential. I’ve noticed a few plot points and I hope the author does something interesting with them. I’ll review again once more chapters are released.

writing seems good so far

also she reminded him of his little sister, if i recall correctly. Perhaps she creates an illusion of familiarity. Perhaps her ability has to do with changes others perception of her, also links with her flaw. I mean so does foresight of course, cause she loses her sight to see into the past and future, which I like.

wth

It’s somewhat of a thing for authors to review their own work and putting anything less than five stars might ruin it’s reach so here I am. Hope you enjoy it. It was a bit of a practice at story I did on a whim for daily writing,. Give it a review if you can.

For this book I'm going to attempt using first person to present the story. There will be different perspectives and different stories and they will all connect at one point, the abyss. I don't want to spoil anything so it doesn't ruin the story so I won't say any more. Anyway, if you enjoy, add it to your collections and write a review.

Do you have the ten spirit stone, sir? No, but I do have something else you might like

Apologies this one was late, was real busy.

If you enjoy the novel, add it to your collection and write a review. Your feedback will decide if I will continue this novel or simply scrap it. I'm not much of a fan for spoiling but this will be a fantasy, though those elements will be introduced later into the novel. It'll be a mix of power, both in strength and wealth, as well as ability, both combat skill in addition to special abilities. Synopsis has all the basic information. Enjoy the novel.

If you enjoy, add to collection.

I will be attempting to have this novel as a daily presence with new content every day. Expect a story based with time, as well as system oriented skills and the life of an awakened. There are some elements such as...I won't spoil anything. Anyway, if you enjoy the novel, please consider adding it to your collection and writing a review- helps a lot. Also, power stones are cool too. Gives you a free pass and helps me to share my novel. Thanks

If you enjoy, add to collection

If you enjoy, add to your collection

This novel will get one or two chapters per day. It'll be a story about the interaction of humans and demons and learning more about the world and, at some point, perhaps bring in the history of elves and the dark truth behind the border.

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ok

Decent opening, to put a thought, I'd say it did it's job and a little more to hook the reader in. There was no unnecessary overwork and it was packed with the information needed to continue reading with a good understanding of the world as well as a glimpse into the main character.

really good and fun to read with good content aswell as concept. I can't wait to continue reading this story, will have to book in my fast passes.