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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_1yr
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    I like the novel, but that changed from the first-moment sex started becoming a big part of the novel, yeah... I guess r18 was mentioned, but the moment I heard a threesome I just couldn't go on. I loved the power system. The novel was slowly building up, but I guess I'm not going to get through the sex. I just don't like sex in novels that much. I just can go on... But it's a good novel. And another thing and advise pls, make your female characters more than just sexual. Characters built on sexual starts are mostly just that. I'll say make new female characters and please make them not so sextually free. It's just not right or at least to me

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    The Deceitful One
    Fantasy · PandaDumpling
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Replied to Nilo_A

    is the main character related to the monkey king because the cover got me hyped to see some monkey action

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    The Evolution Chronicles
    Fantasy · Nilo_A
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    I'm pretty sure leveling up games didn't exist back then

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    My Angel system
    Fantasy · Franklin_Nwakamma
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    it would have been better if you had said something like, The words popping up right in his field of vision

    Luis was confused by the numerous messages that were popping on this screen now, what was going on?
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    My Angel system
    Fantasy · Franklin_Nwakamma
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    approaching them.

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    My Angel system
    Fantasy · Franklin_Nwakamma
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    just after falling the shelf he must have someguts

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    My Angel system
    Fantasy · Franklin_Nwakamma
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Replied to OJASYA

    Please Author I'm curious as to the storyline aspect, most story's of the this tags rather lack story line

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    White blood
    Fantasy · OJASYA
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    🔥🔥🔥🔥

    "His grandma was rushed to the hospital, there's no lunch date" Jody says, looking unbothered
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    "Yeah, My Roommate is a Ghost"
    Fantasy · BeNessa_
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    something they don't even know 😂😂

    "What have you done?"
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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • Lavardemon_
    Lavardemon_2yr
    Commented

    why feel like they'll be dancing like Goku and Vegeta to merge together 😅😅

    Rean then attempted to open his own. Just like Roan, he tried it several times, but they all ended in failure. In the end, he could only give up as well.
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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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