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"You never seize to surprise me dad."Tyler said sitting opposite to his dad.- Phyllis_Neel2yrReplied to _Ana_16_
Hi Ana, I was not asking a question, I was posting a correction. That is why there are quotation marks around she. Most likely the author mistakenly wrote he... but it's been a while since I read this. So when you seen a sentence with a word in quotation marks it indicates that is the correct word and needs changing. hugs
She was just outside the door as her scent enveloped me whole, I don't know why was tiptoeing or walking cautiously like I am a thief or- - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
Also "citing (cite) the court case" "the house will be built on this site"
"There was a sitting of a white wolf in the forests of North America. It was only a glimpse, the area was not shown and neither was the closest pack. It's all in these documents we found in the Alpha's room." He said handing me two thick envelopes filled with paper. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
"sitting on a bench" "sighting a bird"
"There was a sitting of a white wolf in the forests of North America. It was only a glimpse, the area was not shown and neither was the closest pack. It's all in these documents we found in the Alpha's room." He said handing me two thick envelopes filled with paper. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
she "sat" on the
This paragraph has been deleted. - Phyllis_Neel2yrReplied to Mia_Mina
I can not believe that happened. Thanks for fixing it... truly I tried to write dude.
Am I dreaming right now? Or God decided that I finally deserve a boyfriend for being so awesome and amazing? Is this the reward of my right doings? Fuck, I should really keep giving people 20 dollars from now on if it meant seeing men like this. I gulped down an inhumane noise that threatened to escape my throat, saving me from humiliation. This sexy dood send my heart fucking jumping and thumping violently in my chest and I could feel a whole mf zoo in my stomach. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
feel like a king
Being famous made him forgot who he was. Being popular with so many girls throwing themselves at him made he felt lkkd a King and refused to let his weakness showed. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
on his body
Nothing about how he was found with wounds in her body or the missing body parts. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
dare
"Do you dear to disobey the alpha's order?" Josh asked her. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
I don't know why "she" tiptoed
She was just outside the door as her scent enveloped me whole, I don't know why was tiptoeing or walking cautiously like I am a thief or- - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
say not said
What did you just said?! - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
dud not dood
Am I dreaming right now? Or God decided that I finally deserve a boyfriend for being so awesome and amazing? Is this the reward of my right doings? Fuck, I should really keep giving people 20 dollars from now on if it meant seeing men like this. I gulped down an inhumane noise that threatened to escape my throat, saving me from humiliation. This sexy dood send my heart fucking jumping and thumping violently in my chest and I could feel a whole mf zoo in my stomach. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
Dear Author this story needs to be proof read and edited. You have created a fun, interesting and at times gut wrenching story, it deserves better treatment! a person has only ONE LAP, no s. If they were all placing their hands in their laps okay but if only one person then one lap.
Hence, they found themselves with Jeremy and Ryn sitting at the front while Mika and Mei Li at the back with Mei Li's head on Mika's laps. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
imposing not implicating
"You are not implicating Vic, you are my mate, that's the least I could do," Daniel said. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
since I have been "imposing" so much.
"Haha.. that's okay. I should be the one apologizing to you since I have been implicating soo much on you guys." I said as I sat on the bed. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
hair is both singular and plural. however you could use an s for "we found several hairs at the scene of the crime." but for the most part you only refer to her beautiful hair...
My barrier of control burst when he touched her hairs pulling hem behind her ears and then winked at her. - Phyllis_Neel2yrCommented
stands up "for" me not to me... when someone stands up to you they are arguing against you.
The good day is the popular boy in school stands up to me and wants to be my friend. He walked me to class and I've been the center of attention and not to mention he helped me and took me home which is kinda hard to believe.