not to be rude here, but i just realized a mistake: hasnt fang yuan reached great grandmaster in heaven path? it says so on the wiki (and after he finished the heaven path dream realms, he explicitly said he has)

thank you so much for what you have done so far, to me anyways, you've inspired to start writing as well (on royalroad); the amount of dedication you have put into a mere fanfiction astounds me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

do u read the webtoon or do u watch the anime? if you read the webtoon then your opinion might be different

i beg for more

random but mlb's pfp makes me wheeze

you made me cry i dont cry wow

so...you gonna quit this novel? i really enjoyed it to this point tbh

beast cores are this guys crack

after his trainings over or during it r u gonna do a timeskip of a few years or smth?

lol i was thinking karate kid too from crane

take a break then as long as people like your book they'll wait, anyways you've done 11 chapters so maybe it's just self-doubt or smt

his motto is...questionable lol i feel like it can be used in MANY different ways

rank: error alrighty guess ill just not question my sanity or anything that happens to me, thinks the mc,

nice cover

i dropped a stone hehe

ty, btw i voted a stone lol

i enjoyed the chapter doe

that was long but im kinda confused, is he rebirthed into a new family?

hmm, I enjoyed the first 5 chapters so far, but since there isn't much to review, I'll say this. The story is starting to develop into something enjoyable (i.e. errors, powerful character, you know what I mean), and sure, you released it like 3 days ago, so I understand it's new, but you've done a great job in those few days. :clap:

I personally liked it, dunno why I like error sorto f books, glitches in the system, you know?