Omg I. NEED. MORE! 😱

Ooohhh! Luci and Dom are about to see what Vanessa is made of! Get em girl!

This is good. It will get messy and Luci may see what his sister is capable of, but this is a good thing!

Please don't spam other writers. If you wish to have a following, this isn't the way. It's disrespectful.

I'm quite annoyed that privileged must be purchased at this juncture. I paid for and read 538 chapters only to be slapped with yet another $30.00 worth of purchases. This could quite possibly be the 3rd book I drop off from reading when almost completed. Web Novel and many authors are ripping people off. Really great books while still in the writing phase only charge 6 to 8 coins per chapter. This isn't even on their level. I've endured this far out of boredom.

All I can say is WOW. That was a powerful chapter.

Is the book done?

This, for some reason, has me thinking about Vanessa and Luci's grandmother and her forbidden love interest.

The privilege cost on this is ridiculous. I've already spent WAY too much money for this to end in 3 chapters and it cost over 1000 coins just to open it. Most books charge a few hundred. While the book has been fun, it isn't a top 20 and not worth my money further.

It's ME, I'm the friend. Not before this comment but, I'll take it! 🤣

This is heart breaking but also angers me. He was so awful to Luci yet his daughter was something precious to him? I hope he rectifies that comment in the next chapter. He's cold.

The 2 new books you mentioned. Are they not yet on this platform?

I love the entire book. I am not sure I like Vi all that much.. Her character seemed arrogant rather than humble.I get needing to set boundaries, but much was skipped in her relationship with her cousins and the hostility that lived there. I hope there is a sequel to fill in more of the gaps and follow the adventures still ahead.

Hmm, Niyasa or Queen Ginger? I hope Niyasa however, the Queen seems keen on the Devil himself. So, that could be interesting .

Now that was perfectly hot!

First off, I hope your father is recovering well. Second, for those that can't or don't understand that even our beloved authors have lives too, don't give them the satisfaction. This chapter is fire! As always you don't disappoint!

Ok, so Dad was already a rather cold fish, but this... Wow, if it was your intention to make us hate mom right out of the gate, you have succeeded. Just comes in "Like hey kids, haha sorry, mom was at the store for 20 years!!!!" 🤬

Oh Julia, you've met your end. I hope it's painful.

Gahhhh!

Slow, slow burn! Whew, I'm so ready for them to fully connect. They will be unstoppable.