very good

the story is good but cover attract me more. updating 2 chapters in a week is good, try more step by step. hope you success in contest.😄😄😄

thank you

hmm....living as a pig. but it depends on main thing that is in your novel. cover maybe a man with a piggy maks or a piggy nose. readers almost like anime picks.

Everything is great. I like your novel senario. I heard something like this before so i think this type of stories never become old and always are interesting. Only the cover and name of novel arent suitable.

it was better if you describe soldiers face cause i imagine all of them with one face in my mind😅 but i guess cause they arent too important, you didnt it.

it was better if you describe soldiers face cause i imagine all of them with one face in my mind😅 but i guess cause they arent too important, you didnt it.

wow

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

demon became angel im curious...hi.hi

why they got hostaged? hmmm🤔

how old is erynew?

😮 i never thought. the ideas you have are interesting.

maybe. it depends.

if you mean general no, if you mean childs under 13 years old yes. i put it as my country culture and what i guess is undirectly suggest bad stuff. writers never think on their stroy's influence, if they do, they ar rar. if you arent under 13, no need to worry. cause its not under 17.

thanks