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One of the better btth stories here for sure, just hoping you use more natural style of talking in the future, rely less on metaphors. Don't take it the wrong way, the metaphors are accurate and all, but they're a tad bit too many in one chapter is what I would say. Tho I somehow understand the reason—being set in a xianxia world and with grown Yoriichi as main character. Currently chapter 12.
does the main character follow the original plot?
That is true, yet I felt it would fit the culture of dragonstone I'm trying to convey more.
is this gonna get continued or something?
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I'm quite like it honestly — especially the pacing. There's just something fascinating about two sides observing each other, like a game of cat and mouse. And I'm honestly hoping that the Main character is the predator or at least "will be".
I'm liking it so far. I'm just wondering, what's his focus? I mean, he mentioned he plans to unify the shinobi world under 1 nation and he intends to study the otsutsuki clan. Is he going to do it through politics or pure dominance? or maybe a lil bit of both? What's your plan with kaguya btw?