VORANNI
Understand the world, but never succumb to its depravity.
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VORANNI8mthPostedFirst off, the characters are disappointingly cliche. There's no creativity outside of MC being super old. Second, he went to sleep in 1945, slept for 50 years which would mean it's 1995. How TF did MC almost buy an iPhone(2007), uses Google(1998), and downloads Whatsapp(2009)? HOW? Author and all future readers, do like me and drop this story.
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Since when did grief cause asthma? Stress-induced asthma, sure but, stress-caused asthma. That's a little too fictitious, no?
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VIVE LA RESISTANCE!!✊🏿
"I know, I know," the mayor said. "I will do my best to find ones that actually deserve to be here. Please, just give me 3 more months. I promise you, you will immediately start seeing the changes." - VORANNI9mthCommented
Is this bitch high? What has she been smoking?
"I love you, Vincent." She kissed him, and he tasted the metallic tang of blood on her lips. He was surprised to find that he enjoyed the taste, so he kissed her back with a newfound intensity. - VORANNI9mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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Tradition is survival, time-tested survival. The pursuit of the unknown is dangerous. Your words are those of a person responsible only for their own well-being.
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No no no, you're saying it wrong. It's not fiance. It's EX fiancé.
"You..." Adelina's face turned red as she felt humiliated upon getting called out by her fiance. - VORANNI9mthCommentedIn his previous life, he had spent most of the first ten years of his life submerged in darkness. During that time, he had learned to breathe it, to embrace it, to become one with it. As a result, he ended up developing a special technique that allowed him to picture what was around him by relying solely on the echoes of his surroundings.
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Prove it? Your own teacher backdoored you. That's how good you were. Flavor of the story has changed, and I'm not sure I like it.
He wanted to beat the person who was in the first place, to prove to himself that he was good at this and that even the best in this place couldn't rival him in terms of movement and agility. - VORANNI10mthCommented
I just wanna hate her in peace, but naaahh
Brief flashes of dark black bruises could be seen on Melanie's slender, pale arms. - VORANNI10mthCommented
Author, I know you mean well, but
She knew what she'd done was unforgivable, but she walked away silently wishing that Mal knew the full story. - VORANNI10mthCommented"I.. I know you might not want to hear it but I need to say it. I truly am sorry Mal."
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That was a blessing in disguise, my boy. All the fakes would be hitting your line right now.
Eventually he got bored since he'd lost all his contacts and simply stared out the window into the busy street. - VORANNI10mthCommentedOr maybe we were too caught up in what we were being offered to ask why.
- VORANNI10mthCommentedAfter Liu Xue took Lin Xian to the doctor in charge of him, the two of them were allowed to go home even though there was a discussion that didn't make sense. "Prodigy Child," The doctor said because his prediction was wrong.
- VORANNI10mthCommented"I am your sister, Liu Xue. And you are Lin Xian." Liu Xue said in a slightly sad tone, leaving Lin Xian at a loss as to what to do.