Sine_D_Noma

Thats it i´m out. Why make Alice the mate??? She has Jasper as her mate, they even have a nice backstory. If you have no real idea about the universe you interact with dont use them at all. I noticed this in you DC Bookstore novel already, Milim and the whole universe is way stronger than you make them be...

I rly like the original universe and i also liked the start of this ff. BUT i just had to stop before 100 chapters. The strength and story of some charakters is a bit to much AU for my taste. Also the biggest point: The numbers arent consistant. For example one of his depandents: at the star 700k years old and 80k magicules after getting back into the cardinal world. A few chapters later it is 30k magicules and a few chapter later 300k and afterwards 400k years... Also the names like "depandents" change around alot, like "vassels". Sometimes within one chapter the charakter names change aswell. So cant recommand it.

I really like the authors other two novels, supporting him on patreon for those, so i decided to give this a try... I wanted to drop this the first time at the end of ch1, the 2. time on ch2, 3. time on ch5 and dropped it completly at chapter 7... The MC is a whiny little brat. He knows about marvel and its dangers and after a 18 year timeskip without powers he wants to storm Hells Kitchen... He constantly cries about his system (i dont know why you change the system template of DMC to FFXVI, but what ever), instead of being happy he just cries about the things he gets.. The system is sentient, which in my experience never goes well. It tries to bring him BIG trouble with the reward of the 1. mission. As i like the other 2 novels of the author/translator i hope he picks a better novel next time. This is just not for me.

Bullshit, a good fanfic expends on the canon, it doesnt simply change how things (skills, lvls, etc) work. If you dont care about canon than just create a new story and not a fanfic. As a fan i want to dive deep into the world, if there are errors things just get frustrating. You idea is for people who dont rly care about the source universe. So no not meaningless, just a different mindset than a casual reader...