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Thanks for explaining. Except this wound everything was good. …And you are the author who have responded to reader’s opinions. I'll give you 5 stars later. P.S. Nothing should be blamed if it’s too perfect in fantasy world. Because our physical world is fully of imperfect things. Many reader want to leave this fu c k ing real world, So they’re read novel.
Hahaha! After I’ve seen your presentation it’s feel like “ oh! this is one of old era harem novels. The story of Mc and his women who met and left under the reason of personal ambition then reunion at late of the story. Mc will run around universes and meet new heroines then leave behind them for his journey. The true reason is the Author lack of ability to make the story that Mc and his women accompanied for adventure and growth together.
After I’ve read 20 chapters. I'm disappointed in your work. and I have to tell you this novel will never succeed because your folly incest. And I can guarantee with my head! …You’re lack of considering how is reader accept for incest. For example these are the thing you have to present before make incest scenes. 1) Mc is adopted child of the woman who still single. 2) Mc is the true son but he birth from ritual and that woman still single. 3) Mc’s father too evil and his mother was divorced. But you’ve written if Mc’s two parents still alive and they were managing family’s business. You are too silly even no yuri or ntr in your work.
I have to apologize the author for my mistake that gives this story low rating. After the Author confirmed there aren’t Ntrs. I’ve read it, Then I discovered it’s a good harem novel and different to other vampire novel that full of bitch slut and prostitude. Since it is fantasy why you all have to cling to those women with hundred dick such as your girlfriend in your real life. your should find someone that was good and pure as these Heroines. if you blame this harem concept, just back to your slut’s embrace.