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yea but since it is a fiction he can tweak things up a bit having a fundraiser option on yt 5 years before won't be much in the grand scheme of things
I think he had earphones on after all you can't talk like that in a library
bezirze?
looks like this is our cue to get isekaied ...lemme send an email to the address
a meat shield is always welcome ...
its a fiction anyways .... adding fundraiser might be more believable than the superheroes
he has given the newts so maybe
yea have read that
yep cuz they need to pay tax on salary but not on the dividends from share
there is a option called fundraiser...he can put all his videos under that tag...then it'll all go to charity....
noob author....someone tell him he can create a new account and post novels from it
this sounds more like a Chinese fanatic line ....urs is good
humans always like consuming a herbivores meat....* laughs maniacally*
to death... Hehehehehehehe
well said....takes out colt 45
casually curses fury indirectly
Writing quality: The story is well written the sense that I haven't found any major grammatical mistakes as of yet... Story development: The author has changed many events which were crucial for the character development of Canon Characters... Character Development: something destroyed by the author...examples like major characters sympathizing or just listening to the mc even when he approaches them firstly....brush imagine going to dragon and talking casually ..... u ain't gonna get a gossip buddy for sure... Furthermore the mc has gained mastery over his devil fruit as if it were nothing......this is just a joke to those people who have been training their devil fruit power for years.... Update stability: Well, its good.. World background: nothing much to say about this since this is a fan fiction Lastly, I mean no harm to anyone and am just offering some criticism....But simple acts like ace not losing an arm have a huge effect of the character development and even in the future plot....
average in one piece world.....