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Azar_Lin2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter-1: The Hired Magician pt-1- Azar_Lin2yrCommented"Hey, Carl…." The second soldier called out his partner's name.
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Seriously? Couldn't it have been something cool like 'Dullahan'?
[No Head Dragon] was an international crime syndicate that abused its ability to use magic. - Azar_Lin2yrReplied to blade555
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Ah yes, who doesn't love a nice Pogona!
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Author's Self Importance...?
Kin's Thoughts (IMPORTANT) - Azar_Lin2yrCommented
LOL
Also, remember when she lashed out at Eren like a maniac when he just thought about joining the Survey Corps? What would she do when her sons would go fight in a Titanic World War instead?! Say goodbye like a classic Anime mom?!! - Azar_Lin2yrReplied to DarkSeidCh 29 Kin's Thoughts (IMPORTANT)
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Bruh...
Goodbye Eren. It was fun knowing you. However I am a warrior, and I am going to accomplish my mission and become a Hero of Marley!"Reiner thought to himself. - Azar_Lin2yrCommented
System...? How did he know that?
"…, what the. Attack Titan? Founding Titan? What is this? How do I use it? System! Explain to me" Eren thought as he looked through the information, - Azar_Lin2yrCommented
Quite calm for someone whose Mom just died...
"There's no time to think, the gift package definitely will have something to help me, I can take my time later to explore what this is all about later, It'll be too late if I leave it to expire just like this" Eren thought as he silently muttered under his voice - Azar_Lin3yrCommented
No need to ask bro!
But, being the shameless author I am, I would still like to ask you for your Power Stones... Please? - Azar_Lin3yrCommentedCh 25 Not a Chapter
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If that's not cringe, I don't know what is...
'I guess Jin-Woos unawareness around normal things is rubbing off on me.' As I was think this My eyes caught something rather unexpected. I had a period with Rosalie. It was unexpected but I didn't show it. - Azar_Lin3yrPosted
Grammar is quite bland. No specified spacings and paragraphs are huge. Character interactions seem a bit forced, but that should improve with proper paragraph writing. Author has a lot of pokemon knowledge, but execution is not up to the mark as only people who already know will understand anything from some chapters. A little editing and this should be one of the best poke fanfics, keep it up author!
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To Pog Or Not To Pog
A/N: We hit 1K collections on April 1st!! POG!!!! - Azar_Lin3yrReplied to Ultrameatstinct
LOL
One of the contenders for the Throne of Lugnica, the Genius Half Elf Emilia, claims to be pregnant because she kissed a guy… Has her 'Royal Education' not taught her a WHIT about the human anatomy?! - Azar_Lin3yrPosted
Grammar is near perfect. punctuation are very good. Author seems new, so first few chaps are little slow, but still interesting to read. Characters talk and behave realistically and not like masters of english. MC is funny and actually plans ahead instead of being dumb. That is great. So, a great novel in the end. Definitely best AoT I've read on this site. (UNlike the other p.o.r.n.o.s calling themselves AoT) .Cant wait for more!