4phoenixfeathers
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4phoenixfeathers2yrCommentedA telepathic message entered their minds as Willard started to levitate. Various objects in the room floated upward with him and began to dance around. A clipboard flew over toward him and Willard made a finger-gun. When he bent his thumb, an invisible force penetrated the clipboard leaving a hole the size of an orange. After his show, everything fell to the ground and he landed gently on his feet.- 4phoenixfeathers2yrCommented
LOL i can't believe this man. i have to say it. this mans is a chuuni.
"No. I didn't kill the operator myself. The suit malfunctioned, saving my life at the last second." - 4phoenixfeathers2yrCommented
Constellate (verb): To form a cluster or group, to gather together.
Constellate - 4phoenixfeathers2yrCommented
Quandary (noun): a difficult situation; a practical dilemma.
Quandary - 4phoenixfeathers2yrCommented
Desarcinate (verb): to unload; to unburden
Desarcinate - 4phoenixfeathers2yrCommentedCh 18 The Tower of...(3)
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Sophronize (verb): to imbue with sound moral principles or self control.
Sophronize - 4phoenixfeathers3yrReplied to WeedlessSnake
He could be calculating the cost of the necessary materials.
This book has been deleted. - 4phoenixfeathers3yrCommentedCh 8 Chapter 8
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Amorphous (adj.): without a clearly defined shape or form.
Amorphous - 4phoenixfeathers3yrCommentedCh 17 The Tower of... (2)
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low.t?
Though Shaun would not stoop so low.t - 4phoenixfeathers3yrPosted
As interesting as this novel is, it's very hard to read. The characters are interesting, I love how feisty the mc is and the world seems interesting so far. I would be looking forward to reading more, but the writing is hard to understand. There's a lot of grammar issues and words that are substituted with other words. The premise is good and this has the potential to be an amazing top-notch story, but I suggest the author gets some help with proofreading.
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bruh. ಠ_ಠ
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Famelicose (adj.): constantly hungry
Famelicose - 4phoenixfeathers3yrCommented
One of the few novels i would spend fastpasses on
So I will go premium once we reach a good cliffy point. Gifts and Coins will go to getting art commissioned for the story. - 4phoenixfeathers3yrCommented
I have no words this is so beautiful
A normal parasite would have already been taken over by their instincts. Whatever led the consciousness of the modern-day Matt to be fused into this body saved two-thousand people. Loneliness welled up within and just as he was about to begin spiraling, he heard Alexis call out to him. Matt turned his head; the sudden move dislodging the tear that was held at the edge of his eyelid.