Steven_Smith_1510

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then why list it as a skill? skills are either active, or passive..... you're already including the magic based mastery skill passive, I can see this causing confusion later on, but that's just my opinion.

either or works???? I mean, what was the point of this comment exactly? I mean.... say something like "a rare race rarely seen" seems a bit of a tongue twister, might I suggest "a rare race scarcely seen" or "a rare race not often seen", ect ect.... as ALL of those mean the same thing.

it stated at the beginning that this game allows EVERYONE to learn ANY skill as long as they had the skill points. from deductive reasoning, the skills they are talking about would be learning them normally (like the Mc is currently doing) instead of skill points being used..... otherwise the human racial trait would be pointless.

forgot the sword training skill he just got in the last chapter......

also... if the author wants, I can give my discord and proofread, as I really do enjoy this book.

a few? the author can verify he's already edited more than a "few" that I've pointed out, including even putting "Ajax" instead of Leo (best guess it's a Mc to another story). where I agree it's not enough to stop you from reading, as the story is actually pretty amazing, I still find honesty to the author is best, so the author can grow. p.s. if the story was bad, I wouldn't even put in the effort, so since I'm putting in a LOT of effort, that should show how good the story really is.

except I JUST read these chapters.... like in the past 3 days. the author knows I'm speaking truth as he has been editing everything I've been pointing out. like I said, honest reviews help the author.

surprise grade?

Ajax again??? the mysterious side hero