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MPYR2yrReplied to Praweshika_ShakyaSo far, I've written 4 Douluo Dalu fanfics and I can honestly say that this one has been my least favorite to write. If you look at it purely as a fanfic, it's just mediocre. And when you look at it as a story, there are so many inherent plot holes and tired developments. I could consider rewriting it in the future but I have no such plans as of now and likely not ever. If anything, II might make a new novel in the future with just the Koi martial spirit while scrapping the rest. All in all, I'd rather focus on my current two series I'm writing as NightGuard.
Ch 13 First Spirit Ability, End Of Year Tournament- MPYR2yrReplied to Valorant_343
Thank you for your thoughts, I never thought about it this way. This has some impact on how vaguely I can write then. Still, probably will stick to the draft.
2. This was NOT drafted as a harem. I'm new to fan-fic so I don't quite understand what the appeal of it is? Like is it a thing of horniness or do you genuinely like that many characters in the series? I usually struggle to find female characters in a TJSS novel moving, much less so many of them. Let me know your thoughts. If you can make a case for a certain female, then I could look into it but idk... - MPYR3yrReplied to SCP3812As a sword cultivator, he did not think this was necessarily a bad thing however, as his own strength was dependent on the sword to begin with. Understanding that this was the key to his own path, he scoured the forest for Scarlet Fire Monkeys without rest, quickly growing in strength.
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- MPYR3yrReplied to Aeternabilis
But I would like to clarify that the sword is a byproduct of his Body Art which is suited towards sword. In the same way his Yang Sword was born from his old constitution, a new Yin Sword is being born from his Body Art. It will become a second life bound spirit, and it has unique purposes in the story a Yang Sword should not. Dw I'm not just trying to make him a duel-wielding Kirito. On the other hand, I agree with you that the sword unison was illogical on my end, so I removed it. It was only supposed to be a kind of quest for him in order to complete his constitution but is honestly too extreme. That's why, as of this comment, I have removed it. :)
Ch 19 Bright Future Ahead, Passing With Flying Colors - MPYR3yrReplied to HeavenlyOrchid
I revised the chapter to make it clearer for those who are unfamiliar with how these circles work. Yes, Xuan Zi is strong. Yes, Shrek will not release him. But you also must understand that it undermines his authority. In the future, if he puts support behind a person or idea, then the other elders can bring up this incident as a reminder of his 'historically poor judgement.' Although it might still get passed, this is a kind of stain to his political influence and reputation. This is what I meant by 'whole career' not the kind of Guardian role he has in Shrek, but I was likely unclear.
Ch 17 Who I Am, Core Pupil - MPYR3yrCommented
Oh! Almost forgot. This is later in the story but who should I replace in the Shrek Seven Devils? It's between three: Jiang Nannan, He Caitou, and Xiao Xiao. I have my choice but I would like to see other opinions as it might change my mind. REASONS BELOW Reasons - Jiang Nannan does nothing in Shrek tournament but I do like Xu Sanshi and his development revolves around her like Tang San + Xiao Wu. - He Caitou is a cool guy and I have no problems with him, but he is honestly the least change if I were to replace him. - Xiao Xiao is... lol. Idk.
Ch 18 Sister Ma Xiaotao, Growing Hard - MPYR3yrCommentedAlso just hit 100k views as of writing this ^_^.
- MPYR3yrCommented
Speaking of his sword, I remembered that I forgot to include a description. I didn't think of it as anything besides a gold sword, but here's a picture to accompany it
Pressured by the powerful senior's intent, Xin Qing had unconsciously began to summon his sword, however he was not able to do so as the senior suddenly disappeared. - MPYR3yrReplied to CodeZeroZeroShouting Bright Goddess Butterfly, two spirit rings revealed themselves as Wang Dong sprouted a pair of butterfly wings. Knowing he was down three spirit ranks, Wang Dong did not want a battle of attrition, instantly using spirit abilities to try and quickly end the match.
- MPYR3yrReplied to White_Clown
Listen White_Clown, I appreciate that you are always the first to read my stuff but... every question you ask is like forcing me to spoil lol
Still, that did not prevent Xin Qing from throwing the stick with the finished fish into the water, causing a rippling effect around his portrait. After some time thinking, Xin Qing understood why the previously handsome him had become a pretty boy. While in the last life he had a Heavenly Physique of the Yang Sword, in this life, he did not. This meant that in order to bear the Yang sword, his own body had began to lean towards a yin attribute as the Heavenly Dao states that soft counters hard in order to exist in balance. - MPYR3yrReplied to Jso7474
yes. yes it is.
After that bold statement, Xin Qing has already Flickered away, leaving Dai Huabin clenching his fists. - MPYR3yrReplied to draculemorningstar
I meant that he wasn't going to be lvl70 in like two years since he just got reincarnated and is almost lvl30. He'll still be ahead.
(A/N: MC starts stronger but this growth does not continue as it was only due to burning his remaining cultivation after reincarnation from his previous life which was half-way to divine realm) - MPYR3yrReplied to White_Clown
Honestly, I couldn't tell what class anyone was in besides the Seven-Tiled Girl's team and Yuhao's. Besides, does it really matter? I get your immersion, but if not these two then I would be forced to just pick random side characters so I don't think it matters. Unless the twin spirit hair sisters are Class One and I can choose them, but like I said, I can't remember.
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- MPYR3yrReplied to Dana_Brew
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I stopped updating Madara's Ascension in Douluo Dalu because I made a mistake with the Sharingan community and also feel like(because it was my first) it's worse than my other stuff. I want to double update Douluo Dalu: Carp Leaping Dragon's Gate and this series. You'll notice that they are both more recent, which explains the fewer chapters so far. Another thing, I am not getting paid for these and don't plan to, so just keep it in mind.
- MPYR3yrReplied to RebelMasterAfter a few seconds, Shin got up from his crouching position to stand up without forgetting to take Liz on his arm, which despite the action did not move a single inch. Seeing her little cuties, he couldn't help but patting her head and stroking her smooth and soft hair, which gave a very pleasant feeling of touch.