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TheAlpha

TheAlpha

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Newie Newie Author.

2021-03-18 JoinedGlobal
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha7d
    Replied to Lord_of_Endless

    I don't know, maybe...[img=recommend]

    Finishing the oath, Viktor frowned, "Don't forget about reviving my wife,"
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    Villain's Return from Retirement
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha2mth
    Replied to 0THeunkown0

    Yes, Anti-hero with a really morally ambiguous behavior.

    Ch 9 Extreme Anger
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    Heir of the Ultimate Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha2mth
    Replied to 0THeunkown0

    He's not going to be a Hero, that's for sure. [img=recommend]

    Ch 9 Extreme Anger
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    Heir of the Ultimate Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha2mth
    Replied to Joker333

    I appreciate the word of encouragement[img=recommend]

    Ch 8 Targeted (2)
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    Heir of the Ultimate Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha2mth
    Replied to Charles_Pearce

    I will certainly keep writing, so I hope you keep staying tuned![img=recommend]

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    Heir of the Ultimate Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha2mth
    Replied to HPR423_

    I'm glad that you liked my writing style, been working on that. Also, I'll make sure that the novel will keep getting better, so stay tuned!

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    Heir of the Ultimate Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha2mth
    Posted

    The writing quality is solid, but there are some readability issues. Some dialogues are dull but still get the purpose straight. Story and world background development are limited with only 10 chapters, so there's still not much anything to say. But I'm sure it's going to get a lot better, keep up the good work!

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    Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
    Fantasy · Ranch64
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha7mth
    Commented

    A heartbreaking start.

    Ch 1 Ghost of the Blood World
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    Space Nanomancer
    Fantasy · Mrboogey13
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha9mth
    Posted

    Love the story, and the conversation is natural and not dull.

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    MMORPG : King of Supernatural
    Games · Mrboogey13
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha11mth
    Replied to Sylvervyz3

    Don't think so, the curses are depicted as a weird force. I'm not sure, but Rex might not have the necessary type of power to suppress an unrestrained attack from those cursed creatures.

    Ch 778 Flunra the Guardian Angel
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    The Invincible Full-Moon System
    Fantasy · Mrboogey13
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to twooptions

    I understand your point, and I thanked you for the input. But I also have stocked chapters in store ready to be published. And now that you said this, I decide to post 2 Chapters a day until the chapters are enough to keep you, readers entertained. Thanks for the feedback!

    Ch 1 Good Karma
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    Anti-System: the Fallen Angel
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to Fleeting_dreams

    I already posted the review, go and check it out[img=recommend]

    Ch 10 Gate to the Canyon of Virtue
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    Anti-System: the Fallen Angel
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Posted

    Hi there, shameless author review here! The story of this novel sets in a world where magic exists, and humans revered the Dark and Light mages more compared to the other elements because the invading alien race, the Erovian which has a unique constitution against mages. In this world, Samael embarks on his journey to avenge his family's death. As the story progresses, Samael would undergo an immense change in personality. Exposed to the evil of this world, he would eventually be lost himself in vengeance at first. The main line of the story would be vengeance and the search for the Potential Apostles set by the Devil, I highly suggest giving this novel a try if you want to see all kinds of flavors of evil and actions. Of course, there are going to be female interests here and there. Go give it a try, you'll not regret it!

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    Anti-System: the Fallen Angel
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to Fleeting_dreams

    I will post a review tomorrow about the idea of the story, your question will be answered then.[img=recommend]

    Ch 10 Gate to the Canyon of Virtue
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    Anti-System: the Fallen Angel
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to Tommy_Forreal

    With more vote, I will[img=recommend]

    Ch 10 Gate to the Canyon of Virtue
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    Anti-System: the Fallen Angel
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    I’ve been trying all sorts of fantasy tropes, and getting familiar in writing fantasy novels. As of this moment, I have no intention of continuing that novel. But you’re welcome to read my latest novel![img=recommend]

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    In a World of Mages, I Become a Spartan!
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to Black47

    Hai, the latest chapters are going to be caught up in a few days! Thank you for being here[img=recommend]

    Ch 1 Heaven or Hell?
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    In a World of Mages, I Become a Spartan!
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Posted

    Hello there, Author of the Novel here! First of all, let me tell you what to expect in this Novel, this Novel is a fantasy novel. There will be many kinds of Supernatural races, weird phenomena, and most importantly magic elements! From magical plants, weapons, and even mages themselves that can do otherworldly feats! The main character will experience a change in personality in the early chapters, and there's no saying that he won't change again in the future. For those who like action, there will be many cool action scenes! For those who like weak to strong, then this is the novel for you! For those who like systems, this one has it too! For those who like OP MC, you bet he'll become OP! Warning for you though there would be some dark scenes relating to blood and gore, but definitely no rape or anything like that. Be warned! If you have any questions, feel free to use this review to ask me directly. Aside from that, I'd like to thank you for reading and voting in advance. Anyway, I have already taken too much of your time already, hope you like this novel, and happy reading! Cheers!

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    Reincarnated as the Original Werewolf
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to M0R1

    If you are willing to specify, I’m all ears. It’s my first novel, and I want to improve as a writer in a whole👋 Appreciate the review!

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    Brain Eater in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · TheAlpha
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  • TheAlpha
    TheAlpha1yr
    Replied to JockDigger

    Being hit, loud sounds, and even following the lead of stronger Zombies can make a Walker notice Pati as prey.

    Stabbing the Peacekeeping Sword Grinder onto the ground, Pati uses it to support him to stand up before his eyes land on the Brawlers and Walkers that are growling at him, 'Let's take care of this first...'
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    Brain Eater in the Apocalypse
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