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The writing quality is solid, but there are some readability issues. Some dialogues are dull but still get the purpose straight. Story and world background development are limited with only 10 chapters, so there's still not much anything to say. But I'm sure it's going to get a lot better, keep up the good work!
I understand your point, and I thanked you for the input. But I also have stocked chapters in store ready to be published. And now that you said this, I decide to post 2 Chapters a day until the chapters are enough to keep you, readers entertained. Thanks for the feedback!
Hi there, shameless author review here! The story of this novel sets in a world where magic exists, and humans revered the Dark and Light mages more compared to the other elements because the invading alien race, the Erovian which has a unique constitution against mages. In this world, Samael embarks on his journey to avenge his family's death. As the story progresses, Samael would undergo an immense change in personality. Exposed to the evil of this world, he would eventually be lost himself in vengeance at first. The main line of the story would be vengeance and the search for the Potential Apostles set by the Devil, I highly suggest giving this novel a try if you want to see all kinds of flavors of evil and actions. Of course, there are going to be female interests here and there. Go give it a try, you'll not regret it!
Hello there, Author of the Novel here! First of all, let me tell you what to expect in this Novel, this Novel is a fantasy novel. There will be many kinds of Supernatural races, weird phenomena, and most importantly magic elements! From magical plants, weapons, and even mages themselves that can do otherworldly feats! The main character will experience a change in personality in the early chapters, and there's no saying that he won't change again in the future. For those who like action, there will be many cool action scenes! For those who like weak to strong, then this is the novel for you! For those who like systems, this one has it too! For those who like OP MC, you bet he'll become OP! Warning for you though there would be some dark scenes relating to blood and gore, but definitely no rape or anything like that. Be warned! If you have any questions, feel free to use this review to ask me directly. Aside from that, I'd like to thank you for reading and voting in advance. Anyway, I have already taken too much of your time already, hope you like this novel, and happy reading! Cheers!
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