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Dearest Author, I have loved your novel from the beginning, I am at the point where I am having trouble getting through the last few chapters. For me personally, it has become a little too unrealistic and over the top for a romance novel and I am losing interest. I know you are still learning and growing and I admire your writing abilities. Sometimes for me it is quite difficult to digest the romance when it hits close to home. Please do not take any offense to my thoughts and words, for I am just expressing how I feel.
What a cliff hanger. This chapter just like the others drew me in and I feel an instant connection to the main characters. please give us more author. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next.
Sadly separation is the same thing as divorce. Just not official. I don’t understand why couples get into a marriage who think they love each other and its only one sided. If you are meant to be with someone, you’ll know. I wish people like Cassidy and Adrien would work through their problems and try to patch things rather than taking the easy road out.
First chapter was captivating, I was hooked within the first few paragraphs. The only thing that took me out of the story were the few small grammatical errors. I feel like your characters are well thought out and you have written a backstory for each of your leads. Fantastic job! I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Ha! Several months is more like it.
Interesting. Cassidy better have her wits about her. Gilmore is definitely up to something. I could feel it through the words and his sudden appearance…. Unless he found out the truth his own wife had been hiding from him… I certainly hope that Cassidy isn’t actually related to them.
As much as I would like to agree with the comment above. I just can’t. Now that they both know that they had lost their memories, they can confide in each other and start anew. They could work together to take down his family knowing that in the end they can be together. If given a chance with everything they’ve gone through, they could work through their issues without having to restart from the very beginning because those issues will always be between them no matter how many times they start over.
Interesting…. I am curious to know how Cassidy will take the news of his recovered memories. I am quite satisfied with Cassidy taking the high road and letting karma do the work. Olivia and Irish don’t deserve her attention. I am curious to see how the progression of the story unfolds, and whether or not the author will tie in the forgotten memories into the present by collaborating with the same group from his past.
Grammatical error: You’re not Your.