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_Shinobuuu_371

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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
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    the story used to be a little comical. It's just really violent and kind of dark now. Not a bad thing, it's just alright.

    Ch 64 "Who are you really?"
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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
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    The first half of the story feels repetitive and poorly written. There are also many mistakes. it does get better in the second half tho. Alot of detail on how things work in the world. It's basically what you'd expect from most fantasy type novels. it's not a complete a bad thing but the plot is kinda of jumping all over the place but It looks like that's just because of the MC's luck.

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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
    Commented

    How would Saber Artoria Pendragon from fate zero scale in your world? just curious if you wanna answer.

    Ch 30 Beyond The Golden Doors
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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
    Commented

    Cha Cha real smooth

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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
    Commented

    Martial Artist girl dominates bare.

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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
    Commented

    what are the chances a man is there in the middle of the forest to save her? Plot armorrrr.

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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
    Commented

    Runnnnnn. it's wolves

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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
    Commented

    Who sees a pond and actually decides to drink from it. you'll get sick or something

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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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  • _Shinobuuu_371
    _Shinobuuu_3713yr
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    Oh. Another Isekai

    Ch 1 Introdcution
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    Amaya In Another World
    Teen · ZeyaSay
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