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Don't waste your time and money. Author constantly changes names of characters on top of that the author ended the story abruptly and without a closure.

DON'T WASTE YOUR MONEY AND TIME ON THIS BOOK !! The author out of the blue decided to end the story without a closure just because started working on new stories that look nothing but the same.

this Jones is nothing but a fricken stalker is sooo irritating also a psycho. Eliana needs to live immediately and not even tell her parents.

Something is definitely fishy here. Let's not forget that Catherine was into Jones first, also the first person she was in contact with was Jones, now just because someone looks alike another person it doesn't make them blood related (Catherine and Ariel or Damon and Leo) Catherine is a doctor and so is Jones soooo.. let's do the math here.

The story is like a body with no head, arms, and legs. Can't get to wrap up this sickening beginning of it. There should be a sharp description of it for us readers to understand. The only description of the characters is age, names, CEO billionaire,. Definitely more details are needed to get bits and pieces of the story, like Is Mr. Mu this despicable evil man because of revenge? deception? or what ?!

"AUTHOR PLEASE I WITH THE MOST OF RESPECT KINDLY ASK OF YOU TO RE-REVISE EACH CHAPTER BEFORE SUBMITTING". The storyline is good and you're definitely trying your best but the constant errors in names It's kinda of degrading a bit all of your great efforts 😔. Because of this please 🥺 take my comment in mind.

Grounded, phone taken away , not allowed to go out, . How old is she again . I do understand her parent point of view not wanting their daughter to suffer any second longer but seems like on their desperate attempt they're also making a mistake by throwing her to her ex's best friend.

I've read a lot of books of all kinds and I can tell this is a goodo one.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola