DaoistyLklAZ

Автор ты жив? всё с тобой хорошо?

Will there be a second chapter?

The author likes to develop his characters over time, so do not rush to draw conclusions from the first chapters. Yes, there are moments of film production and so on, but this is fan fiction about the entertainment industry. how to write a story if it does not have a basic structure on which the whole story rests. you may not read them, you won't lose much, I would say, but they complement the story by revealing some of the characters, their interactions, fears and much more, of course not all. the author is in a hurry to write chapters and there are gaps in the story. There is a lot left unsaid. Take a break, take a deep breath and exhale, you can write an excellent chapter with 5 stars once a week or many small ones with 3.8 stars every day. There are also antagonists in the story like religion and his family and other organizations, but they are poorly disclosed

he can't. since he can't write anything decent himself. human black envy

I am sure that you have read up to chapter 3 and decided that you already know everything

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These are the deadlines for the release of chapters on patreon

Спасибо бро а то я на 65 главе начинаю думать когда же серия пощёчин прекратится. А оказалось никогда....

I could have given a description of his system earlier, otherwise it was not clear at all. Thank you

I do not know what the author smoked, but give it to me too. in general, the story is so-so for a number of reasons, gg is stupid and does not think about the consequences of his own and subordinates, he does not know how to manage staff, earn money for the sake of earning money, but only through a chest, but he can acquire things through the system and sell them, even if the price is too high and what? the characters also revolve around gg as NPCs dummies without a sense of mind, stupid in general.The system is also too weak for sealing spiritual power outside the store, although the author says that only forces operate in the store itself. I would put 3.5 for the story and then only with a stretch. and yes, gg does not know how to get women. the interaction of the characters is also low, a few words here, there are no thoughts of girls, etc.