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Art_Otzenberger5dCommented… remember this “poem”, not prom.
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙌🏻
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Since when are their two 9 of Diamonds in a deck?
On the fourth card, Ye Feng had an 8 of Clubs, while the man in the tuxedo had a 9 of Diamonds. He maintained his advantage. - Art_Otzenberger1mthCommentedCh 188 Familiar situation
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No items from a BOSS. How disappointing .
The rewards were indeed generous, a whopping 300000 experience points, more than tenfold of the previous BOSS's. - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
Bane?
Bernard spoke up. - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
Wasn’t the name of his mentor Bane?
said Mentor Bernard. - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
Each trainee was recognized …. Please keep your subjects and verbs the correct plurality. Each, by its very definition is singular, so trainee and the verb were should both be single
Each trainees were recognized and rewarded based on the merit of their contributions during the escape. - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
Datas isn’t the correct term here. Datum is the singular form of data. Data itself is already a plural form of the word. Adding an “s” isn’t correct.
After a few seconds, Atticus selected two different datas at the same time. Immediately, the platform emitted a bright glow, and Liquid Metal emerged from the bottom, coalescing and twisting until it formed two robots. - Art_Otzenberger2mthReplied to Mystr
Yes, because they reset at Level 2.
- Fire: 1.1% - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
Your double use of cascade in the first sentence is confusing . A better structure would have been something like” flowed like a cascade…”
Her vibrant locks cascade like a cascade of flames, framing her delicate features. Despite her tender age, her presence commands notice. Standing at a height just shy of four feet, she exudes a youthful charm that is as enchanting as it is endearing. - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
The pontiff , not the sage.
But they did not know that Sage Merlin was under hypnosis all along! - Art_Otzenberger2mthCommented
Please, for the love of God!!!! Stop using that term!!!!!! It’s like having to listen to someone who uses “literally” in everything they say!
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I’m enjoying the story, but stop using that word. It’s quite superfluous here (and no I didn’t need to add ‘quite’ I’m just following your bad pattern) and is the wrong word to use as well.
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… carved into …
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Please stop using the term unarguably. Just use arguably. Every time it has been used so far the better term to fit what you’re trying to say is arguably.
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Grey *couldn’t* care less… is the appropriate phrase. The way it’s worded means he does care about it.
Grey could care less, after getting the direction of where he should head from Void, he didn't slow down, instead, he increased his speed. - Art_Otzenberger6mthReplied to EmeraldSaRose
Cleopatra was Greek, this descriptiodescription doesn’t.
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Just a small *lesson*
"Just a small listen," Leo said. "You might be a 1st Circle Aura Knight and think that's enough. Remember that there are people stronger than that." - Art_Otzenberger7mthCommented
… while cobblestone paths *wound* their way…
In the distance, he could see a magnificent stone-built townhouse with a towering spire standing proudly at the heart of the village, while narrow cobblestone paths winded their way through the community. The entire place was incredibly small though. Compared to actual cities, it was a lot smaller and had fewer than a thousand people.