For saying Alise is Pyrrha’s reincarnation is more so for Jaune to make up for that regret well also giving him a win cause honestly everyone in RWBY is really getting constant L’s it’s almost unbearable

Thanks for the chapter. The way you make him go back in time well showing us RWBY and I’m assuming Neo are going to be there later is nicely done. Along with the twist of having ever afters realm coming to Genkai is fantastic. For a partner or partners it really depends on if it’s a harem. Freya would definitely give him the bell treatment after seeing his unique soul but like bell I don’t think Jaune would love her. I think Alise would be a good choice especially since she looks like pyrrha which means you could pull reincarnation shenanigans saying she’s pyrrha after dying.

With the cover and it being Danmachi most likely a harem story

Pretty good setup so far I’m looking forward to how you develop the story further

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It’s pretty good so far even though the story pace is slightly slower then what I usually read. A system that encourages changing plot is great. I really hope you keep Ryo and Zero-two(I’m totally not biased I swear p.s. I know it’s harem) together throughout the whole story with no cheesy plot induced separation. The updating is a little irregular so I hope you can be more consistent but you probably got other priorities so it’s fine. I’m a little concerned about how you use the whole higher being looming threat in your story progression but I won’t judge for now cause the story isn’t that far in. Thank you for taking your time to write this novel I hope you keep updating it

Great read thank you for writing it

Salem. Just imagine her reaction

Thanks for the upload The story’s good so far and the pacing is perfect for you speed of uploading. I’m curious what u plan to do with his harem though cause it’s already at 6 and the first wold isn’t over. Do you want to flush them out or make them Pokémon or both

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Thanks for the chapters and welcome back.

Story’s good so far

Thanks for chapter. If you don’t feel motived to continue writing this then I suggest to stop writing it cause it wouldn’t be enjoyable for you and feel like a chore or job. Also I would incline you to stop writing multiple novels at the same time as it’s creatively draining and takes more effort to produce multiple chapters a week for your novels. P.S. I enjoyed reading this novel as he was already done with trying to reach the pinnacle as most novels are weak to strong which which gets boring as the plots are usually the cliche and predictable.

Thank you