I think you are making him too emotional at this point... He is not that expressive, he is always a poker face. maybe you should fix that.

I like where this is going, better that injustice at this moment, only need to add some girls to the equation.

This is getting more and more weird by the time… I don’t know what to expect for the future… And since when Esau is so lovely with his team mates, i thought only Barbara was important to him… Whatever.

Beautiful wife… Nice song by the way, you’re a man of culture.

I don’t know, it’s really weird that he has a Kurama. Esau’s travel has become very confusing, I don’t like where this is going.

Sabes, me encanta tanto este FF que acabo de entrar en esta web para leer tu novela. Por favor, continúe con el gran trabajo. And by the way, are you planning to add some girls for Scott soon?

No. 1 or 2 lovers it’s perfectly fine.

excellent chapter, I feel like the chapters are shorter? maybe it's my misperception.

¿Por qué nunca pidió ayuda? ... Nice chapter.

grateful for your return, I missed your content a lot.

What should I say, everything was right until his yuri enters the story. Shit man, you just have to ruin it. I hate when the MC girlfriends start that kind of relationship, In addition to the fact that they are OCs, it leaves a terrible taste in your mouth, I left it because surely if I had more women the same thing would happen.

good premise, it promised to be something good, but then there is the MC's lack of ambition, his strength broken before starting shippuden, Ino is the love interest, having such beautiful and more significant kunoichi, such as Tsunade, Hinata, Kurenai, Tenten, Temari, even Konan and Kaguya were good options, etc. Well, pretty bad in my opinion.

the author underestimates the brain capacity of the readers with this story... Demanding things from a demon king and on top of that acting arrogant and almighty because of his little knowledge, I had never stopped reading something so fast, it is absolute rubbish, I strongly recommend that you don't read it.