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    Good_stuff28d
    Replied to DaoistWDfd8h

    I mean they do but the xeelee tech is more like tech that encompasses entire species as a whole like they have tech that allows them to retcon entire races from exsistining i think and there ships are made of actual space? Dont remember the details but there extremely op

    The Imperator Somnium was constructed not on Mars, but on Terra. It was a unique, golden vessel of immense size, dwarfing even Imperial battleships in both size and firepower. Its size was on par with that of the Orbital Plates of Terra. The Imperator Somnium was extremely advanced, constructed with the secrets of Terra's Dark Age of Technology. As such, it wielded formidable weaponry such as Volkite Storm Accelerators, multiple Nova Cannons along its keel, and Rad-Fusion warheads, and much of its functions were automated, allowing for effective operation with minimal crew.
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    Good_stuff28d
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    Alright man

    Because of my interference, the first three Ruinious Powers didn't come into existence yet. I stopped wars from being fought. Their emergence in the original timeline was the result of the constant warfare amongst humans, the growth of sophisticated early modern nation-states and continued outbreaks of global plagues, respectively. But while there were plagues, I made sure to have someone 'come up' with the solution fast. 
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    Good_stuff28d
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    Thats not my point my point is that the eldar which is a highly more psychic race didnt cause the awakening of the chaos gods and i highly doubt that a small planet would awaken beings like the chaos gods considering there are far more advance and dare i would say more psychicly attuned races than humanity

    Because of my interference, the first three Ruinious Powers didn't come into existence yet. I stopped wars from being fought. Their emergence in the original timeline was the result of the constant warfare amongst humans, the growth of sophisticated early modern nation-states and continued outbreaks of global plagues, respectively. But while there were plagues, I made sure to have someone 'come up' with the solution fast. 
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    Good_stuff28d
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    Welll not really im not competely sure if its canon i dont think so its canon but i just wanna say that the idea that the chaos gods awakening during mankinds rise is stupid

    Because of my interference, the first three Ruinious Powers didn't come into existence yet. I stopped wars from being fought. Their emergence in the original timeline was the result of the constant warfare amongst humans, the growth of sophisticated early modern nation-states and continued outbreaks of global plagues, respectively. But while there were plagues, I made sure to have someone 'come up' with the solution fast. 
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    Good_stuff28d
    Replied to Crimson_Comet

    Not in the chapter itseld he explained it here in the comments

    The Custodes and I have already boarded the smaller vessels and landed on the ground, behind the spaceship and the Eldar. I don't want us to fight on multiple fronts and instead, we will mow through them directly in a frontal clash. I am in my full golden armour that I have been gifted thanks to the Essence, together with my sword. Combined with the Adeptus Custodes, we make a terrifying picture, for any enemy. This picture will one day send people nightmares and cause them to piss themselves. 
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    Question how did he stop tzeench from awakening considering his buildings nations and making progress for mankind which is change and would awaken tzeench more on a side note i really dont like this part of the lore of 40k considering it dosent make sense for a galactic warp god to awaken base on a single species that isnt as attuned to the warp as the eldar are tbh its kinda stupid what gw did here it would make more sense if khorne was awoken during the war in heaven

    Because of my interference, the first three Ruinious Powers didn't come into existence yet. I stopped wars from being fought. Their emergence in the original timeline was the result of the constant warfare amongst humans, the growth of sophisticated early modern nation-states and continued outbreaks of global plagues, respectively. But while there were plagues, I made sure to have someone 'come up' with the solution fast. 
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Oh little lore info the sisters were found in another planet you can jusr search that up

    How was this? I have tried to explain and also show fighting as best as possible. In future chapters, I won't have to do that anymore and maybe the readers can post pictures, when necessary. Thx.
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    Good_stuff29d
    Replied to DaoistWDfd8h

    Okay nice then man gl on your work here

    How was this? I have tried to explain and also show fighting as best as possible. In future chapters, I won't have to do that anymore and maybe the readers can post pictures, when necessary. Thx.
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    Good_stuff29d
    Replied to DaoistWDfd8h

    Np my guy

    After that, the others begin to laugh. At first only lightly and then harder until they are almost rolling on the ground. Mon-keigh, is Aeldari and means 'mammal'. This is supposed to be an insult to us, but what does it matter?
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Aah alright dude but i suggest like my other comment add like a few short sentences explaining the situation

    The Custodes and I have already boarded the smaller vessels and landed on the ground, behind the spaceship and the Eldar. I don't want us to fight on multiple fronts and instead, we will mow through them directly in a frontal clash. I am in my full golden armour that I have been gifted thanks to the Essence, together with my sword. Combined with the Adeptus Custodes, we make a terrifying picture, for any enemy. This picture will one day send people nightmares and cause them to piss themselves. 
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    Good_stuff29d
    Replied to DaoistWDfd8h

    Okay okay

    The C'tan's weakness was their vulnerability to the powers of the Warp and the Old Ones fostered the psychic potential and abilities of the Eldar to high standards. The efforts of the Old Ones were largely successful but had disastrous side effects. The C'tan were defeated, but through the manipulations of the Old Ones the Warp was thrown into turmoil. 
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    Good_stuff29d
    Replied to DaoistWDfd8h

    In my opinion for stuff like this you should explain in a bit for the readers

    All this would happen, while Neoth would begin creating his troops slowly. He had been granted the starship known as the Imperator Sominium and the Star Fortress known as the Phalanx. Neither of them was staffed or armed, but that wasn't a problem for him. Once they had fuel and were armed and staffed, it would prove invaluable to him and the Imperium of Man. 
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Alright dude also if you ever think of making 40k humanity more op check out the xeelee verse there tech is by far one of the most op in sci-fi i have seen

    The Imperator Somnium was constructed not on Mars, but on Terra. It was a unique, golden vessel of immense size, dwarfing even Imperial battleships in both size and firepower. Its size was on par with that of the Orbital Plates of Terra. The Imperator Somnium was extremely advanced, constructed with the secrets of Terra's Dark Age of Technology. As such, it wielded formidable weaponry such as Volkite Storm Accelerators, multiple Nova Cannons along its keel, and Rad-Fusion warheads, and much of its functions were automated, allowing for effective operation with minimal crew.
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Also additionally i really think you should have added the sisters of silence here cause tbh custodes are great against normal guys but they are usally with the sisters of silence to deal with psykers if u added the sisters of silence here im pretty sure a 1k army of custodes supported by the blanks of the sisters of silence and the emps on there sides would have no trouble dealing with high, unprepared eldars

    How was this? I have tried to explain and also show fighting as best as possible. In future chapters, I won't have to do that anymore and maybe the readers can post pictures, when necessary. Thx.
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Im sorry if i sound like a buzz kill but im not sure if the custodes could pull this of i know custodes would usually come out of top against normal eldar but they got killed a bunch of times against ceogorach harlquins(sorry i forgot what specific unit it was) like at least one of those special aeldar were 5 custodes per member i dont think so the eldars in this fight are as powerful they are also unprepared and high but they have the unristricted use of there warp powers without slannesh and there war machines so in this battle im expecting the emps to do a lot of work during fight he will lose a lot of custodes due to the sheer number of the eldar

    How was this? I have tried to explain and also show fighting as best as possible. In future chapters, I won't have to do that anymore and maybe the readers can post pictures, when necessary. Thx.
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    Good_stuff29d
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    A little mistake here my guy the eldar dont call lesser races mon-keigh cause it means mammals they call them that due to a race that they defeated a long time ago

    After that, the others begin to laugh. At first only lightly and then harder until they are almost rolling on the ground. Mon-keigh, is Aeldari and means 'mammal'. This is supposed to be an insult to us, but what does it matter?
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Where did the emps get the custodes gear and the gene tech for the custodes does it poof into existence cause of the essence cause i highly doubt that humanity in this age would have the necessary materials to make them or is this from the ship?

    The Custodes and I have already boarded the smaller vessels and landed on the ground, behind the spaceship and the Eldar. I don't want us to fight on multiple fronts and instead, we will mow through them directly in a frontal clash. I am in my full golden armour that I have been gifted thanks to the Essence, together with my sword. Combined with the Adeptus Custodes, we make a terrifying picture, for any enemy. This picture will one day send people nightmares and cause them to piss themselves. 
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Also didnt the sea of souls become the warp because pf the negative emotions of the war not cause of the direct manipulation of the old ones?

    The C'tan's weakness was their vulnerability to the powers of the Warp and the Old Ones fostered the psychic potential and abilities of the Eldar to high standards. The efforts of the Old Ones were largely successful but had disastrous side effects. The C'tan were defeated, but through the manipulations of the Old Ones the Warp was thrown into turmoil. 
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    Good_stuff29d
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    Wait is it old lore now cause from what i remember what happend was (Spoiler warning in case anyone dosent want to know) The majority of the old once died or hid away cause there race was the main target of the necron/ctan alliance(i think not sure bout this part) the ctan turned against each other then the necrons shattered the weakened ctan and the other races got fcked by the enslavers before the aeldar finally got there empire?

    The C'tan's weakness was their vulnerability to the powers of the Warp and the Old Ones fostered the psychic potential and abilities of the Eldar to high standards. The efforts of the Old Ones were largely successful but had disastrous side effects. The C'tan were defeated, but through the manipulations of the Old Ones the Warp was thrown into turmoil. 
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    Good_stuff29d
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    I wonder if ur aware but there was a gun i forgot from what book it was but i found it on YouTube that there existed what in simple terms is a retcon gun that i think humanity had in dark age tech also speaking of tech would u make 40k reach the levels of the xeelee

    The Imperator Somnium was constructed not on Mars, but on Terra. It was a unique, golden vessel of immense size, dwarfing even Imperial battleships in both size and firepower. Its size was on par with that of the Orbital Plates of Terra. The Imperator Somnium was extremely advanced, constructed with the secrets of Terra's Dark Age of Technology. As such, it wielded formidable weaponry such as Volkite Storm Accelerators, multiple Nova Cannons along its keel, and Rad-Fusion warheads, and much of its functions were automated, allowing for effective operation with minimal crew.
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