Red, Yellow, Purple, and some other colors are real, but black?nooooo

not possible lol, it's more likely for someone to have purple than black

Cry lol

weird, character development, I know you want to make MC with Maki, but it doesn't fit this way lol, too fast too, they don't have much activity if MC falls in love it's natural, MC's background makes it natural, but Maki? it's not normal at all, it needs other content that should make Maki feel the MC is interesting, basically it's too fast

*all her telekinesis

and all his telekinesis abilities are also just because he saw him using the sharingan, MC saw Natsu using dragon slayer magic and boo MC can also do it because he uses the sharingan 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Honestly, is this a trash sharingan novel like most? where the MC can imitate everything and even create items, lol makes me laugh when reading sharingan fanfic stories Last time I read a fairy tail fanfic novel, the MC has a sharingan, and boo he is omnipotent, all kinds of unique magic can be imitated lol, the magic that Erza has is ordinary storage magic .MC can imitate it, I don't have a problem, because Erza is extraordinary not because of her magic, but the speed of activating her magic, and her ability to telekinesis weapons, but MC imitates her armor 🤣

Hello?

author, how are you?.................................................

The order should be like this then: -Larva -Low -Intermediate -High -Demon Lord (This, if not I'm not mistaken Remember is the world where the "taboo child" adopted by the MC, the condition for ascending to demon lord is to survive in heaven for some time) -Demon King -Sin Level

MC became the devil king or demon lord when in the world of "taboo child" he broke through heaven in that world and had to survive for some time in heaven for about an hour if I'm not mistaken, MC succeeded and get a second form. He only gained the power of authority when in the world of Diablo I think the order of strength is like this larva- low- medium- high- demon lord(this was supposed to be when osiris went to that heaven, to rise in rank)- demon king- sin level

Are you serious? Dude says it's realistic in the synopsis, but this isn't okay at all? Do you think it's just because he's acting scared? Hokage would agree? If this was realistic he would actually use genjutsu so that MC doesn't wake up, and the Yamanaka clan will examine his brain

author cmon, in the synopsis you say it's realistic 🤣🤣 but it's cringy and stupid🤮

dumb

Plagiarism of Custom Made Demon King lol Not new content at all, but really copying it, but if you want to post other people's work, at least be honest, don't admit that this is your work

plagiarism 🤮

Custom Made Demon King? The content is exactly the same dude, be careful of getting banned

I've read the original novel Demon King- (this is a regular rank) True Demon King- (Gained the power of authority, in the original novel Roy gained the authority of despair) Sin Level- (this is the level of the primordial demons, like the 7 sins and Lilith)

I'm the second one, I'm tired of finding the first one, what I often experience is that authors don't have a brain so they just copy