miyako1300

And here I thought that he was all for revenge

What about New Ghis? It is far closer

For those who are here to read an empire building fic, please go find better ones. A simple advice for writer, read "A lonely bear", it is a si in Tsar Alexander III of Russia. I really don't have anything else to say except this fic was a massive disappointment.

Shivaji? but even his grandfather was probably not born during Akbar's reign......or has the timeline already gone down the drain?

Nah I'm not calling the views you're getting fake or anything........honestly your story is quite good and for someone who has plenty of free time it would definitely be good read...........but the sheer number of chapters in your story in staggering and after a while it starts getting boring(I got bored after entering Marvel)........anyway I quite liked your story.

Honestly this story is quite good but it is simply too fragmented(something here, something there) for me to get a better understanding.

thanks for the answer

Hey author don't get angry on these small comments I'm simply expressing my views.......what'll you do if you meet one of those real haters??

While the story itself is not bad but the way it is presented could have been better because as the story progresses it becomes boring especially in Harry Potter arc where you'll feel the need to bash the author's head cause of the needless lengthening.

All this planning and politics and subtlety is beyond me and my brain is going mush.